That Shuffling Noise on the Other End of the Phone 3/3

Feb 05, 2011 12:51

Waking up the next morning Puck opened his eyes to a world full of blonde. Somehow during the night Sam had wormed his way up from Puck’s chest, resting his face over Puck’s so their bodies were perfectly aligned and Puck was blinded by the curtain of hair Sam had spread over his eyes. Smiling and breathing in the scent of Sam’s shampoo Puck gently ( Read more... )

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joyincreation February 6 2011, 03:41:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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applepiecrust February 6 2011, 03:48:57 UTC
D'aww! This is so wonderful :)
It's not very GLEE at all, more like a very sweet original fic, but wonderful nevertheless. Puck's definitely in character, so it could also just be a great Puck future fic.

BTW, your pairing header says Puck/Kurt instead of Puck/Sam.

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joyincreation February 6 2011, 05:40:49 UTC
Thank you so much, for the wonderful review and for noticing that mistake. I usually write Puck/Kurt so I guess my brain just automatically decided that anything I write must be that.

It was difficult for me to try and keep everyone in their proper place, Sam especially was difficult seeing as when I began writing this fic we'd barely seen anything from him at all. I really appreciate that you see Puck as in character, this entire idea started off as more of a character study of Puck than a relationship!fic so it really means a lot to me.

Thank you again!

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GOOD- asm613 February 6 2011, 09:11:11 UTC
i didn't really get the end of the story/chapter. what i got from the dialog was that puck's mom said 'how can you do this to me?' in relation to her having to hear 2nd hand about puck being in a relationship. not that it was with a man- but that puck didn't tell her he was dating before someone else had the chance to tell her.

i liked the part about puck asking sam to move in again- as his boyfriend and not as a roommate because he couldn't afford rent on his own. good stuff. thanks for sharing.

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Re: GOOD- joyincreation March 25 2011, 06:31:22 UTC
Hey! I am so incredibly sorry for missing your review for this long, thank god someone just reviewed or I don't think I'd ever see this! Thank you so much for reviewing, it means a lot ( ... )

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anonymous February 18 2011, 18:52:38 UTC
yay, you let anons comment! *sends you thanks*

So let me just say that this is a lovely story. Very nice and heartwarming. I especially that you put in little bits from their canon lives, like the Super Mario Bros. and pizza. Your take on Puck -ahem- Noah is so refreshing yet pleasantly familiar.

So glad I read this, just really glad ^_^

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joyincreation February 18 2011, 21:38:39 UTC
Are you joking? I LOVE anons!

I'm so glad that you liked my Sam and Puck. I'm glad that you read this too! Thanks for all the love!

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icefalcon5767 March 25 2011, 04:52:43 UTC
Omg, I am a horrible horrible lurker. I read this story a couple of weeks ago and was so enthralled I couldn't comment at the time, then real life happened and I forgot about it until recently when I wanted to read it again and realized I didn't have the link to it and I couldn't find the community it was posted in because I follow so many and when I was about to give up hope...I found you!

So...drama aside, i love this story so much and definitely place it in my top ten favorite fics of all time :) your puck and Sam are what I see in my head sometimes, just absolute adorableness.

So thank you so much for writing nd sharing this \o/

~hugz~

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joyincreation March 25 2011, 06:38:20 UTC
Oh bb, don't feel to bad, real life gets in the way, shit happens! I lurk myself sometimes and I know it's not good and that I should comment more than I do; I just console myself with the fact that I as a writer know that for everyone person who actually took the time to write out a wonderful review there are probably ten others that read it, liked it, and moved on.I'm so glad that you could find me again, I hope I wasn't too much trouble, I spread this thing around like it was butter on toast.

It makes me so happy to hear that you liked this little thang so much. After all the time and mental energy that I put into this baby it means a lot to me that so many people enjoyed it so much and that you all seem to enjoy my portrayal of the boys! THANK YOU!

~hugz you back fiercely~

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