Comments | joyincreation: Fic: Almost Lover

joyincreation

Fic: Almost Lover

Mar 04, 2011 02:41

Two months of Kurt’s smiles and kisses. They play over and over in Puck’s mind like an old family movie that you’ve seen so many times that you’ve started to distort the endings in your mind. Puck can’t keep them from playing no matter how different his vision of that time is from what really happened. He knows that they were never really dating, ( Read more... )

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lillian_raven March 4 2011, 10:54:35 UTC

*sniff* A wonderful twist at the end. A great fic. Thanks for that. :D

joyincreation March 4 2011, 20:09:10 UTC

Thank you, hope you didn't cry too much. I know I get close every time I listen to that song!

lillian_raven March 7 2011, 08:34:57 UTC

I understand that. The song is really a heartbreaker but because of that it's a perfect song. :)

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joyincreation March 4 2011, 20:09:55 UTC

Hi beautiful! It's nice to meet you.

great icon by the way, i LOVE that baby!

*cries* nekkedking March 4 2011, 12:42:33 UTC

D: Oh god. That was beautiful and I think I held my breath while I was reading it. That was wonder and sad and made me want to cuddle Puck. Can you write a sequel? I want to know what happens next, but it's not necessary at all since this was beautiful... I\m just greedy. ;)

Re: *cries* joyincreation March 4 2011, 20:11:59 UTC

Breathe darling! protect those brain cells! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. About a sequel, as I was writing it I was thinking about it being a prologue to a longer series, so I'm thinking there will be a sequel, probably a few more updates worth.

pterawaters March 4 2011, 14:41:57 UTC

So I love this song and I love how you incorporated it into the story, but those last few lines really made it. Like a sucker punch they were so unexpected and brilliantly sad and made everything that came before make so much more sense! Great story!

joyincreation March 4 2011, 20:22:41 UTC

Thank You! I love A Fine Frenzy and I can't even imagine the number of times I've listened to Almost Lover, but yesterday it just clicked and I started writing this. It was almost impossible not to use some of the amazing lyrics. I'm happy that you liked the ending, and I completely agree it makes so much more sense once you've finished it, but grief doesn't make a lot of sense so I figured people would still get it enough to reach the end and really SEE. Thank you again.

psyko_kittie March 4 2011, 16:06:22 UTC

*heart breaks* Gorgeous.

joyincreation March 4 2011, 20:23:23 UTC

*hands you duct tape for your heart* thank you, hope you can fix it... go read some fluff!