Comments | jpendizzle: we all fall down in the end

jpendizzle

we all fall down in the end

Jan 12, 2009 23:58

Title: we all fall down in the end
Author: JP
Theme: Ashes
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst? It's something.
Version: animanga
Rating: G

His eyes were like ice.

That was the first thing she noticed about him. He was light and she was dark, he was sharp as frigid crystals and she was as tenacious as molten fire. At first she found his differences intriguing ( Read more... )

Comments 3

lovelylytton January 16 2009, 13:54:12 UTC

If only she had realized that ice can burn you too.

What a brilliant line to end this. Clever clever clever.

charliechaplin2 February 18 2009, 21:39:03 UTC

What a last line! I love how it can be interpreted to mean that she really didn't know him well enough, or that she didn't give him the chance, while at the same time saying that he had enough power to destroy the SilMil.

Oh the foolishness of them all!

Really enoyed this!

jpendizzle February 25 2009, 19:12:36 UTC

Or he got his revenge on her for 'burning' him first. ;)

Glad you enjoyed it! :)