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[jpendizzle]

December Challenge- The Shitennou
Theme Four - Flirting

A little flirting never hurt anyone.

Inaki wasn't sure what led his feet to the stingy bar. Lately, he hadn't been feeling himself. He couldn't concentrate at work and he couldn't remember the last time he had a good night's sleep. Dark things haunted his dreams; a terrible endless abyss from

Comments

[charliechaplin2]

Awesome, love the description, love the atmosphere, it's just so dark and so very good! One isty bisty note, "as she stirred 'his' clear liquor slowly" did you mean 'her' drink?

[jpendizzle]

Thanks for catching that...my mind hated me yesterday...^_^

[lovelylytton]

Wow, I am still shivering. The last line was a killer.

[jpendizzle]

hehe...What are you doing reading my old stories? ^^

[lovelylytton]

I'm reading some old sm_monthly entries, and yours was among them. Very intense fic you wrote there!

[jpendizzle]

Thanks! The Shitennou month was my favorite, ever. I'm really sad I've only written one for this time around...hopefully I can get some more out ahhh.