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[jphobia1]

so i found some poetry i wrote on January 21st. i remember writing it and i like it.
i then was inspired to write some more
please let me know what you think.

Finding The Time To LiveIn the end you are me

Comments

[angel_left_wing]

i like timothy leary

[situationsarise]

-i like the first stanza of the last one, the most.

-i dislike "defining materialism"

-i like all of "battered" except for "or his wrists he might slash"

- :)