an article. let me know what you think.

[jpop_idol_maomi]

I like bras as much as the next girl. A bra is like my own personal AA underneath my top-it offers support, pride, and a sense of wanting to share. However, I feel as though several girls in Chelsea High School are taking the sharing to an uncouth and inappropriate level. How are these ladies over sharing, one might ask. The answer is, literally,

Comments

[mildsevens]

that is beautifully, sharply written, great job! i would urge you to send it someplace....a local newspaper or magazine, so it can be seen in many places!

[jpop_idol_maomi]

It's going in the school newspaper ;D

[katkuddler]

Wonderfully put! And what a gracious offer you have made. I would also ask that you put this article in the Chelsea Standard, Letters To The Editor section. Not only is it free and can be done at their website, but I think many parents would be included on your respectful ways, and be more alert to what is REALLY going on. If parents are allowing their daughters to go to school like that, shame on them!

[jpop_idol_maomi]

Do you really think so?
I need a clever ending, such as "I propose that the administration either enforces and revises the dress code to fit what is needed, or to completely abolish the pathetic attempt that has been made already" or something. It needs a good closer.

[katkuddler]

I like your clever ending. Or some other ideas I thought of: "I think provocative attire (fashion statements) should be used off school property." Or: "Some of us students would like to be able to focus on academic learning without these distractions. Isn't that what school is all about?" Something to that effect.

Just so you are aware, The standard will also publish your name. That doesn't bother me when I feel I have an issue I think needs to be brought to public attention. I'll be watching the paper and see if your article appears! You'd have to email it in by Monday. Not sure of their deadline for their Thursday's paper. Go for it!!!!! ^_^