KyoxWaru - Chapter 1.1

[communistmuffin]

Title: KyoxWaru: Beautiful Incest (Well, Almost)
Band(s)/pairing(s): Dir en grey, mostly KyoxKyo
Author: co-written by me_f_t_w and mr_fxxker
Rating: Uh... Can I abstain?
I say/Notes: ... I can't even comment. In terms of grammar, spelling and story flow, it's not a bad fic. But oh god the story itself. But... um... hallucinogenic giant bees. /thread

Comments

[ninth_revolver]

Okay um...whut? I had so much keeping up with the story itself. The sporking did amuse me to no end though. lololo!

[communistmuffin]

Yeah the story is kind of wtf. DX Glad you liked the sporking though! (And I hope you don't mind I kind of copied off your style for it- it's my first sporking XD;; )

[elya_chan]

This delighted me no end. *cackles with glee*

Shinya: Let's just finish it. Remember what happened last time we argued with the managers? They sent us on tour with Korn!
Toshiya: Hey, I liked that tour!
Die: I got to drink American beer. :D
Kyo: Let's just finish before they try to make us tour with Morning Musume or something.
Shinya: *quietly* I like MoMu...

.... PRICELESS. XD XD

[perfectpeach86]

LMAO I think I love that fanfiction. XDDD Talk about fangirl written. What is it that distinguishes fangirl writing to normal writing? XD You can just tell.
LOL @ the short jokes and Kyo's reaction XDDD

[hizumis_crotch]

LOLWTF?
I AM SO CONFUSED!

So... a Kyo came out of Kyo's mirror and it's just like WHATEVA TOTALLY NORMAL?
JKSAHFKAJSHFD

... I love coffee'd up Toshiya. XD

[authorism]

I was actually wandering about an "ego-filled sway" of the hips myself. How does one actually shake it in a way that is egotistical? Moreso, is it possible to convey other emotions by wriggling your hips? Could I perhaps wriggle my hips in an angry or amused way?

I have asked so many questions, but I fear there are no answers, because the person who wrote this is actually insane. It actually makes me feel safer to envision Hitler writing this instead of a teenage girl, because at least other people know he deserves the firing squad at dawn.

On the other hand, your comments made me chuckle, and I regret to say this brightened up my day :D

Pip pip!