To Seduce a Mark, Part Two of Two

[jrosemary]

Title: To Seduce a Mark
Author: J. Rosemary Moss
Fandom: White Collar
Genre: Pre-Slash
Pairing: Peter-Neal
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Sadly, I don't own White Collar.
Summary: Written for a prompt on Collarkink. Neal teaches Peter how to seduce a mark . . . er, suspect.

LINK TO PART ONE

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Neal sat at a table at the 'bar.' Ok, he was sitting in his own

Comments

[asimaiyat]

OMG the sexual tension is KILLING me! That kiss... wow. Peter is full of surprises. :D And I love how comfortable they are going to bed together. And I love Neal trying to play off how in love with Peter he is.

This made me really happy.

[jrosemary]

Aw, thanks again!

In my head, I had Neal initiating that kiss and guiding Peter, but that's not what happened when I wrote it. And I'm kinda glad.

[sethra2000]

Awwww, jelaous Neal is cute..... silly boy ;0)

[jrosemary]

Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[misura]

Loved, adored and squealed at Peter being the one with experience at kissing other men here, while Neal is a bit out of his depth for once.

And guh. The cuteness of that last scene! <3

[jrosemary]

Thanks again, Misura!

Yeah, I didn't plan on Neal being out of his depth, but that's what happened when I got to the actual writing.

As for the cuteness--lol, I couldn't resist.

[daria234]

Love it! For so many reasons :)

Love that Peter charms Neal while showing him that he can con after all.

And that Peter is 'playing' an old fashioned kind of guy.

And that was a hot kiss. And jealous! and inexperienced!Neal is wonderful

[jrosemary]

Thank you so much, Daria!

Lol--ok, I guess Peter isn't quite playing at being an old-fashioned kind of guy. And I didn't mean for Neal to be inexperienced when I planned this, but that's what happened when I typed it. (My fingers don't always listen to my head!)

[jrosemary]

Thanks so much Shea! That's just what I was going for.