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Address on File, Part Four

Aug 12, 2010 00:39

Title: Address on File, Part Four
Prompt: #3, Hunt
Author: JRosemary
Rating: PG
Characters: Peter
Word count: 300
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Summary: Peter looks back on the hunt . . .
Notes: Written for White Collar 100 Community; part of my My Old Man verse, which explores the father-son aspect of the relationship between Peter and Neal.
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Comments 12

surreal_44 August 12 2010, 04:45:09 UTC

I love this series so much. I like how you've made them a family unit. :-D

jrosemary August 12 2010, 14:02:16 UTC

Thanks, Surreal!

ladygray99 August 12 2010, 04:58:12 UTC

I'm really loving this. I like that Peter was thinking of Neal in an almost parental way even before he was caught. I can't wait for the next bit.

jrosemary August 12 2010, 14:03:04 UTC

Thank you, LadyGray. I wrote a pre-series story called The Sentence about that--I think I'm going to count that as part of the 'My Old Man' verse. :)

daria234 August 12 2010, 06:02:47 UTC

These make me go "Aw." And they make me happy :)

I think this line is just Neal exactly (and Peter's view of him exactly):
"He knew how attractive domesticity was to Neal--but he knew it didn't come naturally to him. "

jrosemary August 12 2010, 14:04:25 UTC

Thanks Daria! I love how on the show Neal seems to want that domesticity (look at his plans to settle down with Kate) but doesn't quite seem to know how to get it. (Just move in with Peter and El, Neal! As a son, as OT3--whatever, lol.)

deepbluemermaid August 12 2010, 06:03:03 UTC

I like Peter's thoughts on Neal's arrest & sentence, and his poor impulse control. Peter may love him, but love certainly isn't blind!

jrosemary August 12 2010, 14:06:04 UTC

Lol! Thanks Deepbluemermaid. Yeah, Peter's not blind to Neal's fault--I reckon he had to spend too much time seeing the aftermath of Neal's crimes. I don't think Neal's blind to Peter's faults either, though. ;)

shelley6441 August 14 2010, 14:44:45 UTC

You are a published writer, yes?

It's so funny how the FBI folks refer to Moz as 'the little guy' when they know perfectly well that his name is Dante. LOL!

Thank you!

jrosemary August 15 2010, 11:39:44 UTC

Hey Shelley!

Let's say I'm working on becoming a published writer. *Blushes.*

Meanwhile, I'd love to hear Peter call Mozzie 'Dante!' I think Haversham is as close as we'll get . . .