Comments | jrosemary: A White Collar Birthday Fic for Elrhiarhodan: Exit Strategy

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A White Collar Birthday Fic for Elrhiarhodan: Exit Strategy

Apr 13, 2011 21:45

Title: Exit Strategy (White Collar Fic)
Author: J. Rosemary Moss
Genre: White Collar; OT3, Like Air verse (asexual Neal)
Pairing: Peter-Elizabeth-Neal
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Alas, I don't own White Collar or the characters
Summary: Sequel to Like Air. Neal realizes he needs an exit strategy--for Peter and Elizabeth's sake, if not his own.
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Comments 22

micheleeeex April 14 2011, 03:41:00 UTC

Awwww, I love this!

jrosemary April 14 2011, 04:03:49 UTC

Thank you!

rabidchild April 14 2011, 08:25:13 UTC

Oh, this is to love. What a wonderful, domestic glimpse into the relationship. I love Neal's hesitation to change their dynamic, and how natural and casual Peter and El are about letting him in. I hope you will consider another part to this story.

jrosemary April 24 2011, 02:05:29 UTC

Thanks so much, RC67! A "domestic glimpse" was just what I was going for, so I'm glad it came through. Meanwhile, I love Ace!Neal stories, so I'll probably try another one!

elrhiarhodan April 14 2011, 15:53:56 UTC

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

For me! All For Me!!!!!!! My birfday has been THE BEST EVAH!!!!!!

I love and adore this - tentative Neal, who is trying to reconcile his "see-want-take" mentality with his uncertainty on how to fit into a relationship that already seems so perfect. AND THE CUDDLING - GAH!!!!!

I am still not quite coherent from my delight.

Thank you and thank you again!

jrosemary April 24 2011, 02:06:36 UTC

Thanks, Elr! I'm so glad you enjoyed your fic, and so glad you had such a wonderful birthday. Hugs!

P.S. Hehe--I love the way you explain Neal's attitude: "See-Want-Take!"

ext_186374 April 15 2011, 01:14:42 UTC

This is so perfect.

Well, Neal was not in the habit of trying to save his marks from their folly.

... seemed so right even though Neal wasn't running a con, it made me smile more.

I love this sequel SO hard!

jrosemary April 24 2011, 02:10:57 UTC

Thank you! And I'm glad that line worked for you--I think Neal saw this as a con, in so far as he felt as if he had to 'fake it' to fit in.

monkeyonthelam April 15 2011, 01:20:35 UTC

Neal's tension in this fic is palpable. Excellently written.

jrosemary April 24 2011, 02:14:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I appreciate the comment.