Tease - Drabble

Sep 29, 2008 16:58

Title: Tease
Author: Me
Rating: PG-13
Characters: J/E
A/N: Drabble written for blackpearlsails  prompt: Echo.
Disclaimer: Don't own.

Tease:

Elizabeth bit her lip, turning at the whisper of desire that seemed to echo around the room, reverberating in her head. Her eyes, gleaming with excitement, fell on the man whom was waiting for her, half hidden in the shadows with a ( Read more... )

drabble, sparrabeth

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phoenixjack September 30 2008, 00:59:21 UTC
Ooooh Jack is SUCH a tease ;) All that delightful tension at the beginning was wonderful.

It's good to know that he intends to follow through later because if he teases her too much, he could find her sword at his throat [although maybe Jack would like that ha ha ha...]

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js_1245 September 30 2008, 01:15:18 UTC
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments!

I'm glad you liked this drabble!

And yes. Of course he'll follow through! He just loves to see her all riled up. Even through that, though, he wants her just as much...so I doubt he'll tease her for long. ;)

Ooh! I bet he would. ^^ Then he could say something witty and get her in bed anyways.

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djarum99 September 30 2008, 02:35:51 UTC
I do love Jack the tease :-) Nice work ♥

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js_1245 September 30 2008, 14:46:51 UTC
^^

Thank you so much for the comment!!!

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js_1245 September 30 2008, 19:18:30 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words, Kate! :) I'm very glad you liked this drabble (though you know, recently all these have looked around the same... *must think up of better ideas* lol)!

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bellbubble September 30 2008, 17:52:45 UTC
Lovely drabble!!

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js_1245 September 30 2008, 19:19:22 UTC
Thank you so very much!!!! :)

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