Here in lies 'It'

[judasmalfoy]

The hedonistc heroes of my youth now lie dyin at the bottom of my toy chest.
I hear their gasps and moans in the darkness of the day.
They fondle themselves in secret spaces ashamed and happy.
Where has my freedom gone?
I think my parents threw it out.
Accidentally on purpose I stumble down cobble stone roads, past the pretty painted whore houses.

Comments

[real_sick_dream]

I like that a lot, beautiful imagery.

[judasmalfoy]

^^ I'm glad you like it, after I wrote it I let one of my friends read it and he basically told me it was a bit shit which kinda got me down. But I'm happy someone else but me likes it.