Fic: Climbing Up That Hill

[judith_88_g]

Title: Climbing Up That Hill
Author: judith_88_g
Rating: PG-13 (just to be safe)
Genre: gen
Characters: Dean, John
Spoilers: 7x23
Word Count: 1500
Disclaimer: Still not mine. Don't lose my hope, though.
Summary: The feeling of death is prevailing, this adverse and desolate endless forest is not meant for the living, not meant for humans. It's a murky cheerless

Comments

[somer]

Oh my god, oh my god, this here, yesyesyes...awwwwww!! JOOHHHHHHN! And Dean...

I’m tired, Dad. and “You think you can walk with me up that hill?” That was so heartbreaking.

Very beautiful and perfect. LOVED IT :D

[judith_88_g]

Thank you so much for a lovely comment. I thought that John would be just the person Dean craved and needed to see. I´m really glad it worked for you.

[vicious_sanity]

This had such a beautiful melancholy to it. The sheer loneliness, intercepted by random monsters out for blood, the wounds stacking up, culminating in Dean collapsing were all smoothly strung together. I LOVED the vision/delirium-induced hallucination/near-death experience scene so much. Using the hill as a visual for the level of difficulty for Dean to pull himself back from defeat/death was genius.

I'm so glad you wrote this.

[judith_88_g]

This had such a beautiful melancholy to it.

I'm stoked to hear that. Melancholy was exactly what I was aming for so it makes me jump around the room with an idiot-like grin on my face real happy that it actually shows in the fic.
Thank you so much for your amazingly kind words.

[spangielka]

"The stars, the moon, they have all been blown ooout..." *G*

But really, what a lovely imagery; the dreamy aura you convey with such vivid descriptions of perfectly detached dark and glitter. Guh!
To think what the show has offered so far in the purgatory department were few trees and bushes with some lampy red eyes peering from the thicket here and there.

I especially liked the lines referring to Cas.

[judith_88_g]

"...No daaawn, no daaaay, I'm always in this twiliiiight."

Ekhem.

Thank you for your lovely comment. The dreamy aura thingy? I felt kinda out of my frame, y'know. But I really wanted it to come across as such so I'm extremely happy it shows.

[rince1wind]

I missed this one. It's good.

[judith_88_g]

I'm so happy you liked it. Thanks muchly for reading and taking the time to leave a few words behind :)