Fic: Good Day Sunshine (5/5)

[judith_88_g]

Title: Good Day Sunshine
Author: judith_88_g
Rating: R (language, whump)
Genre: Gen
Characters: Dean, Sam, a tiny bit of Bobby, OCs
Spoilers: Up to 2x01, set in early season 2
Word Count: 6,400 (21,00 total)
Disclaimer: Still not mine, don't lose my hope though.
Summary: Sam and Dean receive an unexpected phone call and learn that one of John's old friends

Comments

[sailoreyes67]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[judith_88_g]

♥ ♥ ♥ right back atcha!

[sailoreyes67]

Awww, thank you!

[judith_88_g]

My pleasure :)

[amonitrate]

I enjoyed this!

[judith_88_g]

Thanks. I'm very happy to hear that :)

[judith_88_g]

Thank you! It's so nice to hear that both the plot and the boys' voices worked for you.

[rince1wind]

Good story. You certainly have Dean's and Sam's voices down. Their relationship, too.

[judith_88_g]

I'm very happy you liked the story. Thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know.

[spangielka]

I've finally got to read it in one go, beta'd and all, and it's a truly amazing story. I liked it even more this time around.

First of all, the way you handled the plot here is seriously impressive. I remember when reading it for the first time, I was striving to see how Sam fit Shannon's kid into all this and I got nothing. Rereading now, I knew where to look and indeed Sam's guess was valid.

The pacing in the later chapters left my head spin and I loved it. The tension you created is amazing (Sam stuck in a cell, the dull, still scenery of it while Sam was aware that his brother was deeply in trouble at the time - that practically itched).
Action was splendid - the scene in chapter V felt so movie-like.

I still can't place some pieces of Dave's history in time but it's nice being able to think things over after the read.

Wonderful, thank you for sharing this! :)

[judith_88_g]

Why, thank you!

I'm extremely happy that both the pacing and the plot building seems overall alright to you. I remember staring at my outline and struggling horribly as how much information I should impart at different stages so that the events would make sense but the outcome wouldn't be awfully predictable.

I still can't place some pieces of Dave's history in time

Oh, I just hope I didn't miss anything. *rubs jaw* But hey, I would be happy if you felt like pointing me towards the places of doubt :)

Thank you so much for taking that trip, and then for your fantastic make-me-smile-so-broadly comment. I really appreciate it.

[spangielka]

Oh, you didn't miss anything. I tend to get lost in plot quite often. Mine included.
I'll PM you about this. :)