Harry Potter Fic: Entwining Kisses (G)

[juicydodger]

Title: Entwining Kisses
Rating: G
Pairing: Cedric/Hermione
Word Count: 656
Summary: A Yule Ball dance is shared.
Disclaimer: Do I look like I own it?
A/N: This is my first shot at a Cedric/Hermione fic. All mistakes will be fixed when I find them. This is my first jab at a fluff, so please, be kind and throw pillows instead of knives!! Anyway ... I hope

Comments

Sweet!~

[rainevalentine]

Awww...the last part was so sweet, sweet enough to give anyone a toothache. Well done. Wish you luck if you're gonna write something else!~

[darksilvermoon]

hehe. absolutely cute and fluffy like cloud nine...which is where i assume they would be. :) love the last lines and the overall touch.

[hazy_crazy]

“Is that red I see on your face, Mr Diggory?” Hermione playfully giggled.

Cedric leaned closer, smelling Hermione’s enchanting fragrance and meeting her brown eyes with his grey ones, “Why, Miss Granger, all I see is you.”

How very bittersweet! The overall tone of the story was lovely, too.

I noticed a mistake. She felt his arm wrap around her waist, and her own snacking around his neck.
I think should be: She felt his arm wrap around her waist, and her own snaking around his neck. Unless it's meant to be sneaking, I'm not sure. ;)

Despite this minute mistake I enjoyed this. Good job considering it's your first Cedric/Hermione!

[juicydodger]

Thanks for pointing out the mistake! It's meant to be snaking so thank you very much. I just realised it said "snacking". I'm glad you liked it, I wasn't sure if I could pull it off, with all the lovey dove but it sounds like I did heh. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[radical_teen]

i feel bad for cho. no offence but i've actually somewhat taken a liking towards her and her relationship with cedric rather than with hermione. it's the REAL thing.

but anyone who can write a decent fic i say you're good. and you are

[silverangel15]

Oh, honey that's beautiful! I love it! You write wonderfully. It's sweet and romantic and witty and sexy. I've found my java-junkies queen and I've met my Hermione queen! Great going! ;)

You just keep making em better and better! :D Ttyl.