original fiction: we are waiting on a telegram.

[julietofspades]

we are waiting for telegram (to give us news on the war)
original fiction. r. By all right, Scott and I shouldn't have gotten along. (I met Scott’s sister that year. Maybe that’s the real story.) 2111 words.

Comments

[synecdoche]

I loved the tone of this story -- the mix of cynicism and nostalgia is really brilliant. You say so much with so little, a whole span of years tied up in moments. Thanks so much for sharing! I really really loved reading. ♥

[vinniebolzano]

That was lovely.

[kiwiiix]

I have never written a comment for a post in this community, but I just enjoyed this so much that it was irrefutable for me to not. Really good job.