eat me, drink me, love me

Nov 12, 2010 23:26

Title: eat me, drink me, love me
Rating: R
Genre: Gen
Spoilers: Season 3
Warnings: Nothing worse than your average episode, surely.
Disclaimer: I don’t own them. And that’s probably for the best, really.
Notes: My infinite gratitude to alchemise who bought me in the Help Haiti auction, asked for a True Blood fic, and then waited patiently while I picked my ( Read more... )

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jujuberry136 November 13 2010, 04:51:11 UTC
Hooray! It's posted!

I really enjoyed this fic and the changes you made from the last version. As I've said before, you really capture Pam utterly perfectly and I adore her immensely in this story.

God I love the new ending.

SO PERFECT!

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jujuberry136 November 13 2010, 04:51:46 UTC
stupid invalid codes. Sorry for the ugliness (times like this I can see the value in paid accounts...)

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july_july_july November 14 2010, 02:24:12 UTC
Thanks! I went through your edits with a pen and just cut a lot of stuff. Lots of dead weight in there. And sometimes I get carried away with the cutting. So i"m very happy that you like the changes! And even happier that you think Pam's believable.

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alchemise November 13 2010, 07:22:28 UTC
AAAAAHHHH OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! The whole thing is so wonderfully visceral, all the sensuality of vampires and hunger and blood and Pam! Oh my, Pam! All of this is so completely canon for me now.

You couldn't possibly have known this but I adore "The Goblin Market." I once wrote an essay, as an undergrad, about the sexual subtext of the poem. Heh, that was a fun paper to write. So this worked perfectly.

And I loved the rhythm of it, with the snippets of Pam's life as a human and vampire intercut with the poem. The whole story moves beautifully.

EEEEEEE, thank you so so much. I'm just going to reread this and revel for a while. :D

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alchemise November 13 2010, 07:25:00 UTC
Btw, it's my birthday in two days and this was totally an awesome early birthday present. \o/

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july_july_july November 14 2010, 02:25:45 UTC
Holy shit! I can't believe I got the poem right! Um, I'm sorry that I kind of butchered it, cutting out big chunks and the whole ending. But sexual subtext, I has it!

I'm so happy you like the story, and so sorry it took me such a long damn time to write it!

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spankulert November 15 2010, 20:20:50 UTC
This was a highly enjoyable read. Love your Pam.

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july_july_july November 17 2010, 03:46:33 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you stopped by to read it!

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hereswith February 2 2011, 23:40:16 UTC
Great fic! Your Pam feels very much in character to me, and I liked how you switched between timelines.

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july_july_july February 5 2011, 05:34:08 UTC
Thanks! I appreciate your taking the time to leave me a note!

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sunnyrea February 3 2011, 16:23:49 UTC
This is magnificent. It so nice to see a backstory for Pam, a development from human into Vampire. She's always so strong and this was a wonderful delve into her past and her character. Lovely work!

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july_july_july February 5 2011, 05:34:59 UTC
Thank you! Pam is my favorite female character on the show. I'm flattered that you liked my made-up backstory. Thanks for leaving me a comment!

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