ahhhhhhhhh my love!! I am in lovE with this entire epilogue!!!! i love the steady and calm partnership between Kai and Jongdae asdfghjkl my hEART ughhh and also lu han and yixing being so cheeky and funny gaH (*♡∀♡) And just all of the legends being alive and together and bickering ٩(◕‿◕)۶ what a ride!!! this has been such a lovely ending for a fantastic fic, i'm so happy and proud ლ(°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥Д°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ ლ) ♡♡♡
ohmygod, what a wild ride. very intense from beginning to end but the epilogue is so soft and fluffy??? the epilogue is perfect and a really good way to end the story. i adore mama!aus and i adore your story. and i adore you, your writing, and your writing style. thank you for writing. :)
i am in love. there's just too much to love about this fic. jongdae/jongin is not a pairing i usually read but i was so enrapt and excited by the tags, the description, and the prologue to not keep reading! mama powers concept is one of my absolute favourite things to read when they're so well incorporated into fics, like yours is :)) reading the guys as detectives is also so exciting!
kai's character was super interesting and i could not, for the life of me, make a solid guess as to if jongin was really kai in disguise or not haha! on the other hand, i really enjoyed how you concluded the whole story. every moment of this fic was an interesting one, and not one word was wasted. i want to thank you bc i'm so happy you shared this amazing fic with us readers ;;;; you're awesome
so this is a terribly awkwardly late reply to your comment but my lj has been haywire?? anyway thank you so much for reading and enjoying ;u; YOU are awesome i'm so glad you enjoyed it and stayed on the edge of your seat ♥♥
Wow. Just wow. I loved it! Every bit of it. What a nice addition to the MAMA!AU collection of fics. Truly wonderful!
What i loved about this fic was that it reels you in. I mean it reeled me in and I couldn't stop hitting next HAHAHA I could feel Jongdae's desperation to stop all of what's happening and his sheer will to keep his sanity. I loved how you wrapped it up in a slight sneak peek of the future and how everything turned out 😂 Will you continue this universe? If you will not, all is well. But if you do continue, I'd be excited on how you're going to portray a definite resolution for Jongdae and Jongin in the future 😁 Thank you for sharing your work Author! It made my day wonderful 😆 I hope to wish you a great day as well 😃
Mystery is a tough genre to execute but I think you a respectable job with this story. You managed to keep me engaged - curious about what was to come in chapters I was yet to read
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first of all: thank you thank you thaaaank youuuu for such a well thought out comment. seriously, i appreciate it! i don't normally write stories like this (chaptered stories with a fixed day of the week release) because i feel like people get burnt out on it. posting monsters like this all at once (perhaps on ao3 where there's no character limit) seems to be the best way to get really thought out, in-depth critiques/comments/reviews. so im really happy and thankful that you took the time to comment this TT_TT
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(つд⊂)ｴｰﾝ you are daaaaa bessssssstttt ♡♡♡☆ thank you so much ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
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i adore YOU thank you so much for taking the time to comment after reading all of this ♥
really, thank you thank you ♥♥
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kai's character was super interesting and i could not, for the life of me, make a solid guess as to if jongin was really kai in disguise or not haha! on the other hand, i really enjoyed how you concluded the whole story. every moment of this fic was an interesting one, and not one word was wasted. i want to thank you bc i'm so happy you shared this amazing fic with us readers ;;;; you're awesome
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anyway thank you so much for reading and enjoying ;u;
YOU are awesome i'm so glad you enjoyed it and stayed on the edge of your seat ♥♥
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What i loved about this fic was that it reels you in. I mean it reeled me in and I couldn't stop hitting next HAHAHA I could feel Jongdae's desperation to stop all of what's happening and his sheer will to keep his sanity. I loved how you wrapped it up in a slight sneak peek of the future and how everything turned out 😂 Will you continue this universe? If you will not, all is well. But if you do continue, I'd be excited on how you're going to portray a definite resolution for Jongdae and Jongin in the future 😁 Thank you for sharing your work Author! It made my day wonderful 😆 I hope to wish you a great day as well 😃
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