Gift for takewing!!

May 22, 2008 11:31

Recipient's name: takewing
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Straw Hat gen with Zoro/Sanji undertones
Disclaimer: One Piece is all the genius of Oda
Warnings: Spoilers for anyone not up-to-date with anime or manga
Author's Notes: This fic was unforgivably late, but my waffling wouldn’t end. This is a crack plot with a side dose of hallucinogens, just like the song ( Read more... )

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astrokender May 22 2008, 18:56:07 UTC
This is the most fantastic thing I've read in awhile. Seriously, it was comedy gold. Everyone's characterizations were spot on and they interacted fabulously.

Best part: Luffy's claim to Zoro and refusal to give him up....

....unless it's for meat.

Loved this. Bookmarked it so I can go back and reread it later.

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maxine_chan May 22 2008, 22:30:41 UTC
OMGGGG. ALSJHDKLAJDASD. *__________* This was like...amazing. SO perfect. Just the right amount of crack and humor and seriousness and I LOVE that you included the post Thriller Bark stuff. That's like...my absolute favorite thing to read right now, and I really, really liked Sanji and Zoro's conversation about it. The plot was hilarious and ridiculous and AWESOME, and I seriously wouldn't even be surprised if Oda decided to throw an island like that into his own story, haha. And I loved that even though you had the Zoro/Sanji undertones all throughout, the rest of the crew had plenty of screentime! Oh my god, I pretty much DIED every time Brooke made a SKULL JOKE or Franky went on about being super - little things, but they're the exact things that made everyone SO in character. AND JOHNNY AND YOSAKU!!! ALJKSHDKLJASD HAHAHAHA!!! Man, you were seriously spot on with, oh, EVERYONE. Very, very awesome ( ... )

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takewing May 23 2008, 00:24:58 UTC
And after collapsing into a puddle of goo, Missa was only then able to make the following comment ( ... )

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xredribbon May 23 2008, 17:06:18 UTC
Oh. My. God.

It was fantastic. Everything. Was. Absolutely. PERFECT! The island, the situation, the plot, the characters...EVERYTHING!

Marimo KING! hgjflds I can't even put together a real coherent thought. I'm a fan of good characters, which One Piece has a lot of, and just their development and interactions. You portrayed every single character and the way they interact with each other so perfectly. Everything from the reactions to the Marimo King to the much deeper post Thriller Bark stuff was just amazingly in character and really blew me away. Like just about everyone else who reads One Piece, the whole end of Thriller Bark just fascinates me and I'm so glad you included it for the Zoro/Sanji tone.

And yes, Zoro tracing the eyebrow kinda made my heart skip a beat there. *__*

It was fantastic.

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