For blue, blue skies

Oct 31, 2008 05:01

Title: Collision Course (13b/13)
Pairing: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Harry Kewell/Steve Finnan
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is all fiction. I don’t own the boys. If you don’t like slash, don’t read.
A/N: Collision Course | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8 | Part 9 | Part 10 | Read more... )

collision course series, steven gerrard, harry kewell, fiction, stephen finnan, xabi alonso, fernando torres, daniel agger

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ladykillertofu October 30 2008, 22:20:19 UTC
OH MY GOD.
(first things first: how could i miss the last chapter? why didn't anyone tell me? I DON'T LIVE ON PLUTO.)

Then euhm. I really can't believe this is the last chapter. Like, the final one. Like, the there's-not-going-to-be-another-one chapter. Mh. :(

But it's LOVE. I love the happy endings and the dialogues and the awkwardness and everything.

Xabi shrugged nonchalantly. He raised an eyebrow, “I could have joined, you know.”
BWAHAH, DAN. YOU HAVE BEEN PWNED. :D

“You set me up!”
“That I did,” Sami nodded, smiling serenely
That is just so... Sami. Pretty much sums up the image you created of him during the whole series. And I'm in love with that image. :D

“I want to kiss you so badly right now,” Stevie murmured, fists clenched as he forced himself to stay his ground.
“Please.” Xabi called out softly. “Please do.”
Killed me. If you hadn't let them get together again, I probably would've had to kill you.

Oh, Torres. You had me at ‘fuck me over.’
Best line to end this. Because it's Togger. And they are awkwardly romantic at ( ... )

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jumping_down October 30 2008, 22:41:43 UTC
OH MY GOD, I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER TOO! ASDOIASDPOAIWPIAP.

Haha, you missed 13a?? That's okay, I originally intended for 13a and 13b to be one part, so you got the best possible way of reading it! The others had to wait an entire day and reconnect the gap in between. o.o

BWAHA. I loved the Xabi/Danny snark in the bus stop. And Sami, oh there is no other way to write him than as deity, you know. XP

ASDPIAPDOIAP. And yes, the quiet, tortured way Stevie and Xabi got together in the end killed me while writing too. I will never be happy with my love life unless it's like theirs. Like, with umbrellas and rain involved.

And major keyboardsmashing for Togger endings. Because they're both so awkward and clumsy and crazy in love in strange ways, heeeeee. I am fangirling my own story, why is that strange?

(Shh, I love Harry and Finns the most too.)

Aww, bb. I'll miss your comments. They're always one of the comments I look out for because they're so hilarious and touching and amazing. ♥

PS: Mikel is Gossip Girl, didn't you know?o.o

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ladykillertofu October 30 2008, 22:56:44 UTC
THIS IS THE TIME FOR PANIC, CAPSLOCKABUSE AND KEYBOARDSMASHING. ASINDOAISFNOASF.

You're cruel. Really. Posting 13a and then waiting A DAY until 13b?
Lucky me, my retardedness saved me from your evil plan.

Sami is just >>> world. Can I just get a Sami Hyypia to figure out my relationships for me? (for some reason i couldn't stop imagining him wearing a toga and carrying some huge old book with him. sorry.)

Umbrellas + rain + undeniable denied attraction. Let me be Stevie. Or Xabi. Or just let me watch. ;D ( ... )

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arsenal4ever October 30 2008, 22:29:14 UTC
YAY!
i am half sad and half happy...i am happy that it is all a supposed 'happy ending'...but it is also an ENDING...i kind of wanted it to go on forever...is that stupid?!
haha well anyways...was as awesome as ever!!!

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jumping_down October 30 2008, 22:34:31 UTC
It's not stupid, it's such a strange feeling closing this story too. :P Thanks so much for your comments, bb. ♥

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After all, it wasn’t a good idea to argue with the person who owned the umbrella. regions October 30 2008, 22:31:15 UTC
Mika. This whole fic is gorgeous. How will we ever get on with our lives knowing this has come to an end? D: Thank you, thank you for putting so much time and effort into writing this. Really, it's the best AU I've ever read.

It's absolutely perfect and Stevie and Xabi are just the most precious thing ever and I am so glad they got back together in the end and the way it happened was so sweet. Mikel is amazing as usual. I seriously feel bad for Fernando because Dan is such a frustrating character who keeps hurting him. Poor bb :( Oh, and in these last two chapters you've made me love (your) Finns. And Harry was perfect as usual. A perfect ending to a perfect story.

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Re: After all, it wasn’t a good idea to argue with the person who owned the umbrella. jumping_down October 30 2008, 22:45:42 UTC
You quoted the umbrella excerpts! YAY I LOVED WRITING THAT HOHOHOHO. (It was raining here like crazy and I was always getting drenched, I had to find some way for one of my characters to live through it too -.-)

Mikel is amazing. He is like, Gossip Girl. XOXO.

Thanks so much for sticking with this fic and for your generous comments. I'm blushing like crazy. ♥

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Re: After all, it wasn’t a good idea to argue with the person who owned the umbrella. regions October 30 2008, 22:54:58 UTC
The umbrella bits were - I was going to say perfect but I know I've used that word 45930 times already so just think of any synonym to 'perfect' ♥ I have no idea if it was intentional or if I was reading too much into it, but I thought it was kind of symbolic.

You deserve a delicious treat. Seriously. I just want you to really know how much I appreciate you writing this. ♥

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Re: After all, it wasn’t a good idea to argue with the person who owned the umbrella. jumping_down October 31 2008, 06:02:09 UTC
You deserve a delicious treat.

I prefer a Fernando Torres please. With whipped cream on top. ♥

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alejaboo October 30 2008, 22:40:55 UTC
finally! *pops the champagne and throws the confeti*
*smooches*
i would say i loved it, but that's only because my english vocabulary went out the window and i can't think of a higher form of apreciation!

you moulded them together so well *applauds*
love finns and harry still. and movies are my faves!
and the rest is just perfect *glomps*

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jumping_down October 30 2008, 22:42:26 UTC
Thanks, bb. I will need that champagne to get me to sleep. I'm on a high after finishing this. XP

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harleymarley October 30 2008, 22:56:49 UTC
awww i cant believe it's finally over!

this story has seriously amazed me, and i've been hooked the whole entire way through - even if i haven't commented (which i apologise sincerely for), i really have appreciated every part of this.

part of me is overjoyed that there's finally a conclusion, and everyone got what they wanted (YAY!) another part of me is sad that it's over.

but thankyou for taking your time to write this for all of us, because it seriously is amazing. i loved every single bit of it.

oh, and this:
“Are you fucking crazy?” A voice yelled to his ear from out of nowhere.
Stevie would have replied, “God?” But he knew that heavily accented voice anywhere.

was brilliant, and made me LOL!

thankyou :) xxxxx

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jumping_down October 31 2008, 06:09:43 UTC
I can't believe it's over too! But sincerely, comments or not, I'm eternally grateful you stuck through all 13 long parts. And I'm glad you liked them all. ♥

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