I may not let go

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Title: Stars (4/?)
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is all fiction. I don't own the boys.
Summary: Inspired by this photo at caras_de_pecas. The prompt was "bodyguard Dan, up-and-coming singer Fernando, they spend long nights traveling cross-country on a tour bus and Dan has to use his body as a shield to prevent Fernando from

Comments

[elisa88]

It's amazing to have this story back ♥
Poor Nando, hopefully Danny's company will make him feel better! XD
Looove how these boys just can't get enough of each other♡

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It's a bit of a slow burn, isn't it? I always find it hard to develop their relationship swiftly, it feels like -- especially with boys that have never been with someone of the same sex before -- the love has to slowly creep up on them and gradually convince them that it's worth the risk.

[elisa88]

i'm sure you'll do an amazing work!! (i had no clue these two were straight(in ur story i mean) , i kind of assumed they weren't? sorry..)
i like that it is a gradual thing though (even if we all would rather to see them rip their clothes off ^_^) but it gives it a sense of reality.. you know?
<3

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Haha, no problem, I've very very very lightly hinted at it so far but I think I'll emphasise it in the coming chapter. :)

[niezapominajk]

I love that you put all those social networking ♥ Boys taking selfies! If anyone ever tells me that girls are impossible with taking pictures, I'll laugh at them. My cousin showed me pics from his trip to Egypt; five nearly 30 years old guys, 5 different poses, every pic the same place and it wasn't even some nice, fancy, typical for this country place, it was in front of their hotel! I thought I was going to die ;D I love Stevie ♥ I find his behavior adorable. And the boys are so making me feel warm inside. I hope Nando will be fine.
Happy 2014 for you too!

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I'm so guilty with getting my pictures taken all the time, but yes boys are just as bad sometimes! Selfies and you can't even see where they are and what they've visited cos their faces take up the entire frame. :))

[lumaste]

Aww, poor Nando, but it was funny how everyone was fussing over him. Xabi is awesome, if it weren't for him Dan and Stevie would have killed each other by now.The way they just can't stay away from each other is adorable. I love your boys and this story. I'm so happy for this update.
Happy 2014 and I hope you'll be able to stay true to your resolution :D

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Awww, thank you, I'm glad you're liking it so far. I feel like I've spent too long trying to paint the dynamic among the four guys! Hopefully the payoff is worth it for you guys later on in the story. :)

[acrayonsmile]

I love you, I love you, I love you. This couldn't have come at a better time :)

Finally, someone sees that they're falling for each other without actually knowing it. Question is, what's Xabi gonna do about it?

Stevie and Dan are always so tense together. They seem like the type of people to have the same goal, but conflicting ways of achieving it as they're completely different people. Not in a bad way of course, just different.

Love your writing. FYI, I have February's foursome fic almost ready to go, soooo you'd better be writing February's Stars. I'll hold you to your resolution if you hold me to mine!

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Hahaha. I LOVE THE CHALLENGE. I've barely started with my next chapter, but I'm gonna get to it cos I don't want to lose in this game. Our prize is each other's work. ;)

[gerlonso]

Yay, a new chapter!!

Dan and Fernando are adorable. AND STEVIE AND XABI. Just them sitting next to each other makes my heart palpitate with happiness ♥

I really do love the tension between Dan and Stevie. And peacemaker Xabi.

Sounds like a very busy holiday for you! I'm glad you've finally had time to take a breather :)

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Yes, and I think I'll have more free time soon, all the better to write. :) Thanks for reading, love!