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Title: Stars (5/?)
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is all fiction. I don't own the boys.
Summary: Inspired by this photo at caras_de_pecas. The prompt was "bodyguard Dan, up-and-coming singer Fernando, they spend long nights traveling cross-country on a tour bus and Dan has to use his body as a shield to prevent Fernando from

Comments

[golden_slumber1]

Damn this was so well-paced, I was on the edge of my seat really. I so wanted them to finally make out but it's okay I enjoy the torture and of course Stevie and Xabi had to be such cockblockers.

On a less hormonal note, I really enjoyed Stevie's side of Fernando's story and really felt for him too even though in this story Stevie has been hard to like as he's a big meanie at times. I hope we get to read what he and Daniel talked about after his blurted out confession.

I'm so glad you decided to continue with this, I don't think I've ever read a fic quite like it. Can't wait for more.

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I was scared about making Stevie go on and on, but I felt he deserved a little airtime cos nobody ever understands where the evil bosses are coming from. He just gives a lot of tough love.

Thanks baby!

[niezapominajk]

You're back! I'm so happy!

I really missed this story. It's always great to read something written by you, you have a wonderful style. And this story ♥ I was waiting for a make out session with all this garden walk and everything, but instead there was a fight. I'm not complaing though, I liked Stevie's story about Fernando and I'm dying to know how his talk with Dan went. The boys are just adorable ♥

Loads of inspirations ;*

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Thank you thank you! I think I got a little pressured before churning out a good story by sticking to the formulas I had before, but now I just wanna roll with what I've got and try to improve my writing. Does that make sense?? And it's so strange to see Stevie and Dan all civil with each other haha.

[niezapominajk]

It makes all the sense :) When you're gifted you can't keep it only to yourself. And trying to improve? You're really amazing. I hope one day I'll read your book :) :)

[acrayonsmile]

I love how natural this is progressing. It's not rushed or a load of drama dropped into my lap all at once. They're falling for each other and it's real.

I love Stevie and Xabi so much. Even though I probably shouldn't like Stevie given how much of a hard ass he is, but I does. <3

Glad to see you writing this again

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It gets so stressful to draw things out, but I hate hate hate reading stories where they get drunk at the beginning and at the end they're like... I love you. WHAT HAPPENED.

[dld_ftw]

So excited this is back. Great chapter! Can't wait for more.

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Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

[lumaste]

I'm happy you're back to writing! This is beautiful. Dan and Nando are absolutely sweet and I was cheering for Dan, when he gave Stevie a piece of his mind. I was going to agree with him on Stevie's treatment to Fernando, but on the other hand Stevie's words have some truth in them too. And it was adorable how the boys were trying to take the blame on themselves to save the other one.

Loving this story.

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You know what, I realised I've never done a fic before where the boys aren't exactly out. I just kind of smooth over that fact usually, and now I'm gonna have to deal with it and it's so tough!