Pillow Talk

Jun 17, 2007 23:28

Title: Pillow Talk
Author: junas_stories
Pairing: Cristiano Ronaldo/Wayne Rooney
Rating: R
Word Count: 1397
Disclaimer: Don't know anybody or anything and am not making any money. Sadly.
Summary: Wayne and Cristiano have a heart-to-heart…of sorts.
Notes: Written for the prompt 'lovers' at footballslash11. And as always, feedback is very much appreciated.

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fandom: footie rps, challenge: elevensies, character: cristiano ronaldo, pairing: cristiano/wayne, character: wayne rooney, rating: r, warning: humour

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avaneko June 17 2007, 22:08:43 UTC
"Who's the girl now, Waynie?"
ROFL. Exactly Cris!
The convo between the two is priceless. And Wayne's musings on Cris...he's so in love despite himself. *cackle*
Mmmm smut! And the post cuddle. Aww.

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junas_stories June 17 2007, 22:15:30 UTC
Oh, Wayne is a big softie anyway. The great thing is that he doesn't even try to hide it. I so respect that. So, he can appreciate male beauty without going all insecure. Okay, not exactly when he knows Cristiano is going to tease him about it. ;)

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memororis June 17 2007, 22:19:55 UTC
Can I comment better tomorrow? *puppy eyes* I'm dead tired right now, but I loved this! :P Tomorrow, a better comment, I promise! :)

Goodie nightie! *hoogles* WE WON!

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junas_stories June 17 2007, 22:23:10 UTC
Of course, you can. Especially since I'm about to fall face first onto the laptop myself. Bed is calling.

Glad you like, though!

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memororis June 18 2007, 20:21:06 UTC
You wrote sex again! ... *cough* And you said you can't do it. ;) Anywho, loved this. ^^ The hotness and sweetness of the beginning and the banter and the adorableness of both of them. :)

"Why are you asking?"

"Rio asked me."

XD That killed me! lmao. Oh Rio! I can so see that happening; him wrapping his arm around Ronnie's shoulder and his upper lip moving in that odd way of his. lol

And Wayne totally echanted by Cris= love. ^^

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junas_stories June 19 2007, 11:17:36 UTC
I kind of did, didn't I? Still makes me a bit uncomfortable but I felt it fitting for the story to not start with the afterglow.

Oh, absolutely. Rio's upperlip. Totally has a life of its own. And Ronny could have been so distracted by it that at first he didn't even get the question. ROFL.

Thanks for the longer feedback! *hoogles*

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suedkurve June 17 2007, 23:12:06 UTC
Awww that was so lovely, hot, funny at the same time!! There's no way but to love Wayne and Ronny, they are so perfect together! And Ronny IS beautiful, definitely! ;)
*smiles happily and drifts off to sleep*

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junas_stories June 18 2007, 16:55:06 UTC
Oooh, thank you! Absolutely agree with you - there is no resisting them. ;

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aeroporto June 18 2007, 01:47:01 UTC
Oh the final line is just priceless. This whole fic was typical Wayne and typical Cris. I LOVED IT :D

*FLAILS* AND *TWIRLS*

Roo is so adorable, btw :P

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junas_stories June 18 2007, 16:56:02 UTC
Thank you! Thank you! *blushes*

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nadi_wamos June 18 2007, 06:28:15 UTC
"Who's the girl now, Waynie?"

awww that was so cute & funny! :D i love the way you typed ronaldo. too cute. "You is sooo easy! So fall for it!" lmao!

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junas_stories June 18 2007, 16:57:13 UTC
Teehee! Thank you!

Love your icon, btw. Truly one of the greatest line in a movie ever. *giggles*

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nadi_wamos June 19 2007, 07:16:41 UTC
yeah yeah true! two of my favorite things put into one icon. hah.

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