Fic: Brown Eyes

[junbait]

Title: Brown Eyes
Author: Junbait
Rating: G
Classification: Present
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Summary: How does Mao react to all the rumours going on about Jun and his co-stars?
Disclaimer: Don't own

Promt: "the fluffiest, gooiest, incredibly sweet FLUFF MaoJun fic ever. Cliches welcome. Cheesy lines, even better." by Yoshi09
Dedicated of course to

Comments

[novemberbaby]

I was actually thinking of writing a fic like this but I'm glad you wrote it so I won't be tearing my hair over it and doing my papers the same time.

I love how you portrayed Mao's trust in Jun. No hesitation in saying that she trusts him. And of course I love how Jun calls her a little devil. <3

And you're probably right about the facade. There's nothing to worry about ^__^

[junbait]

Well great minds do think a-like ^__^
Good luck on your paper!!
Thank you for reading even though you're so busy!

[yoshi09]

Ahh... so much fluffiness! Please don't take this to offense when I say I felt that this part was vomit-inducing because the fluff was incredible:

"It did not matter how good of an actor Jun was, he could never lie to Mao; it would show in his beautiful, perfectly shaped, light brown eyes."

Hahahaha, it was so gooey I had to reread it again to let it sink in since my body was resisting. ^-^()

Thank you so much, Junbait. I know what fic to read after some really heavy angsty ficcies now. <3 *loves you*

[junbait]

well you did say cliches were welcomed lol
ahaha of course that's me talking.... Jun does have beautiful eyes... and they are just... so beautiful.... *is hypnotized* LOL
You're welcome! it was fun to write! thanks for the prompt! It'll still be a long while before I write the other fic that I owe you ^__^;;

[grilledteeth]

this was cute and sweet ^_^
i like that jun calls mao little devil.. hehe

thank you for sharing..

[junbait]

ahahah Don't be fooled by Mao's innocent exterior! thanks for commenting!

[jodie26]

this is superr sweet ^_^
& very cutee :D

[junbait]

thank you! it was fun to write!

[fangirlism01]

fluff overload!! especially the squishing jun's cheecks part!!!!
haha...
i really enjoyed reading it.

[junbait]

Jun's cheeks are so puffy LOL