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[june7rose]

Elizabeth:

I’m dancing with Lt. Doyle when he walks in.  The Captain.    I know he fancies me.  He’s had a hard time keeping it secret since my debut almost two years ago.  The amazingly confident, and if I may say so, pompous man I’ve known since I was twelve.  Does he not know he’s too old for me?  Father seems to be happy that the Captain

Comments

[cal_reflector]

I can't remember another author who captures the tease side of Elizabeth so well; the two-can-play-the-game side of Norrington is excellent too, though there might have been another author who did just as well, perhaps I'm recalling your writing again.

[june7rose]

Thanks so much, this is my "cold shower" fic. :blushing:

Lovely!

[tammsla]

I love it....and the apples are a perfect representation of why I'm a Norribeth shipper ;D

Re: Lovely!

[june7rose]

Thank you. That's definitely the one closest to a bodice-ripper! James inspires such. :)

[saime_joxxers]

Ah, that's a wonderful fic. The apples are such a brilliant idea.

I like how it's a sudden revelation to Elizabeth that Norrington isn't old. xD I can imagine how she might think so, though, with all the responsibility and everything he has to shoulder. In any case, it's just great.

[june7rose]

Thank you, I refer to that one as my "bodice-ripper". :) It's like a short romance novel. I get a smile on my face every time I read it. Sigh, James.....

[lady_elizabeth2]

Very nice. You had me hanging on every word, making me hungry for more and that may also may have come from your creativeness with the apple hehe

[june7rose]

It never ceases to amaze me how you guys find these older stories. This is actually one of my personal favorites, outside of Daydreams. I'm glad you like it.