Holiday Fic #2

[juno_chan]

Title: Betterment
Rating: M
Word Count: 1644
For: fields195
Prompt: Ned/Cat: An awkward reunion with Jon & Lysa leads Ned and Cat to realize how lucky they are to have each other.

Comments

[wicked_g]

Ugh, so effing good. SO GOOD. YOU STOP THIS NOW, YOU HEAR ME? All so...good and stuff.

It sickens me.

ilahveitomg

[juno_chan]

LOL THANKS BB <3

[joely_jo]

What writer's block?

Excellent, as always... I am envious, as always. :)

[juno_chan]

Hahaha, thanks!! It's been rough-going, believe me. The words just aren't coming as easily as they have in the past, and while I'm glad everyone is enjoying the results, I'm not completely pleased with them. But I'm forcing myself to power through!

[tullypond]

UNGHhh, no words, other than perfect amazement beauty. It's such a Ned trait, to first feel guilty over having it all, while wanting the best for his old friend, and then feeling more guilty because he knows he would never give up Cat and the children, for Jon.
And then sexytimes, oh yes.

[juno_chan]

Hahaha, thanks!!! Ugh, Ned has SUCH a guilt complex, doesn't he? I figured his guilt re: Brandon could easily extend to Jon, considering all that Jon did for him and Robert.

[fields195]

SQUEEEEEE!!!! I was so excited to see this posted! What a perfect holiday gift

[juno_chan]

Glad you liked it, bb!! And of course Ned feels guilty over any happiness he has - broodiness is a Stark family trait, after all! ;-)

I hope these exercises in happy fic writing haven't been too hard on your blackened heart, XD.

OMG IT'S BEEN SO HAAAAAARD WHAT ARE YOU GUISE DOING TO MEEEEEEE??? ;-)

[oparu]

This is stunning. So beautifully inside Ned's head, with his respect and love for Jon and how he would choose Cat over everything. I love their dialogue, how they're each other's port in a hot, stifling storm and how the nightgown is too much like Lysa and a hindrance.

So gorgeous!!

[juno_chan]

Thank you dear!! I initially debated about having more dialogue but I figured well, these two don't necessarily need to talk (and Ned isn't much of a talker ANYWAY, is he? XD). Glad you liked it!