< Transformers > Hop into my ride~

Nov 30, 2009 09:55

Title: Hop into my ride~
Prompt: 035. Superstar
Author: crazedwolf
Rating: PG-13
Series: IDW
Characters: Hot Rod, Mirage
Warnings: Slash~
Summary: “My engine's ready to explode!”
Author's Notes:
Written for NaNo! So..cloud_sama and I love crack pairings. Love them so very very much and this is a prime example of one of those crack pairings. ;D I blame her ( Read more... )

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ravynfyre November 30 2009, 15:51:55 UTC
There's just nothing quite as hot as a pair of sexy, speedy cars makin' it with each other. I really enjoyed this, but one thing kept jarring me out of it... the use of "servos".

A "servo" is generally either a servomechanism, or a servomotor. They are components which can me found throughout a mechanical device as complex as a Transformer. Using "servo" specifically to refer to a "hand" is... confusing to anyone with even the most passing of engineering backgrounds. (And by passing, I mean "having played with a Radio Shack toy or two in their youth")

There are going to be servos in the shoulder, the hips, the neck, everywhere, just about, that there is a joint or other significant moving part... and seeing things like "pushing Mirage up against the wall with his servos pinned above his helm" makes me automatically wonder what portion of Mirage's anatomy just got savaged to come up with those servos. Can't say that I'm terribly much into vore or gore, so that really jars me out of the sexy like whoa ( ... )

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crazedwolf November 30 2009, 15:58:34 UTC
I'm not sure exactly where it all stemmed from. I picked it up through reading other fics and whatnot and everytime I see a list of terminology for the fandom and whatnot, servo is usually put as hands. I started using it because for awhile there I was getting a lot of crap from people for using terms like "hands" and "lips", etc when I was referring to Transformers.

I see what you mean though, as to what servos truly are and it really does make you wonder how it all got connected together in the first place.

Thanks for your comment though. :3 Outside of the servo thing, I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;3

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lightningscythe November 30 2009, 16:57:31 UTC
I think the term servo used for hands came from Animated. Fanfic writers just exceeded the term from the Animated line and into other generations for their own personal gain thinking its a more relative term for the mechanics of a bot's form.

But I might be wrong.

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crazedwolf November 30 2009, 17:09:46 UTC
I think you're right; they did use the term "servos" a lot in animated.

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okami_myrrhibis November 30 2009, 18:36:44 UTC
I'll echo servo=fingers origin as TFA. Which if set in TFA, I'm cool with. But in all the others, iirc, servos = joints.

But overall, a short & sweetly hot fic.

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junsho_wolfeh December 1 2009, 00:31:10 UTC
Fair enough~ Like I said up there-- -motions- --I base the terminology I use off a lot of the fics I read and generally I see most people use servos. Not that I have any qualms against using regular terms though. :3 It's all transformers in the long run.

And thanks so much! ^^

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tainry December 1 2009, 04:43:25 UTC
RAWR!!! <3

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crazedwolf December 3 2009, 04:02:12 UTC
BD

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candyflosskillr December 1 2009, 23:37:04 UTC
Great fic, I liked it, smexy boys. Crack pairings are the BEST!!

Rihanna! That's been bugging me - couldn't work out the lyrics. xD

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crazedwolf December 1 2009, 23:41:24 UTC
That they are! BD

<3 <3 <3 <3

x3 I have an obsession with that song and it made my muses go crazy.

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lotr_jedi December 23 2009, 20:35:12 UTC
Thank you TF:A. Lol! Great job, btw. I don't think Mirage/Hot Rod is a common pairing, but correct me if I'm wrong.

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crazedwolf December 23 2009, 20:39:31 UTC
xD Nah, it's a crack pairing if anything. cloud_sama and I like to put random characters together and see what comes of it. x3

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