Comments | jupiter68345: 3.2 HOW DID IT END UP BEING THIS LONG?

jupiter68345

3.2 HOW DID IT END UP BEING THIS LONG?

Jan 30, 2005 18:32

The story must have a werewolf in it. The story must have some medicine appear in the middle. A character will prepare for a birthday. A character is shot in the story. During the story, a character talks about a myth ( Read more... )

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av29 January 30 2005, 19:17:02 UTC

Nice. But, why does everyone know that she's a werewolf and what prevents her from being hunted down like her master?

jupiter68345 January 31 2005, 01:29:09 UTC

She lives in a magical world (think HP) and he was murdered by vampires (think Underworld). I knew this I was writing the story but I failed to specify.

anemptymind January 30 2005, 19:39:49 UTC

not half bad. As Anton said, some holes, but it's a short story.

jupiter68345 January 31 2005, 01:29:39 UTC

Yea, and I had to write it in less than half an hour.

anemptymind January 31 2005, 17:06:31 UTC

Wow, really? It takes me about that long to write an entry that I'm just pulling outta my ass.

0bsidian_truth January 30 2005, 19:45:12 UTC

i think u posted this in the wrong place....this isn't Pure_Ink....it wont be graded...

jupiter68345 January 31 2005, 01:30:31 UTC

HOLY SHIT!!!!! thanks!

wordsofstealth January 30 2005, 20:41:55 UTC

good story i like the name. lamir romulus mandrake.