Title: Irrational Choices - chapter 7
Pairing: Ryo x OC x Jin
Rating: pg-13
Disclaimer: Everything in here is fiction. Ryo is mine. XD Seriously, I don’t own anyone or anything. =)
Summary: A surprise visit. Will it help her forget? Or will she be back to remembering all over again?
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I loved this chapter. Seriously, it was great! JIN! THAT BAKA.
I am glad Ryo is so sweet to make ammends with his parents!! YAYY FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!
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this was such a hard chap for me to write but this was a turning point in the story, so i had to. i'm glad you like it! ^_________^
i miss you so much *hugz*
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i love this story!
hehe sorry but my English in not very good!XD!
you write very well!!
congratulations!!
I love all your stories!
hahaha and i love Ryo too!
=P
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aww, thank you for taking the time to leave me a comment. it means a lot to me. ^^
I love all your stories!
- *dies* wow. really?! thank you!
oh, i love Ryo as well. yey to sharing! XDD
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haha.
Really!, You are amazing!
I´m Waiting for the next chapter!
:3
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next chappie will be up soon.=)
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lolz awwww this was a really i guess hmmm motherly chap???? lolz but u updated!!!!! XDDD
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haha..i just can't resist including his infamous hornyness..XD
yes! i finally updated! haha.. and i can say this with bravery, i will post the next chap within the week.. i have already finished it, so YAY! hehe... =)
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i hope Mrs Nishikido's words knock some sense into Yuri.. :D
-arigatou-
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i was wonderin' where you are honey... i can tell you that this is a turning point.. it will be revealed on the next chap..
thanks! =)
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SO....I freaking love this, especially this bit of conversation:
“Tomi-chan, no matter how close you guys are, he is still a guy. Men are stupid by nature. And no matter how we try to program them to be sweet and caring like we want them to be, there will still be moments of jerkiness that we cannot avoid.....that is why the gods created a hybrid known to us mortals as ‘gays’. They’ve got the woman’s feelings in a man’s body. Too bad they also seek men. I could SO date a gay man.”
AND OMG-MOST AMAZING LINE EVER:
remember that a broken heart can’t heal if you are still holding on to some of its pieces
That is so ingenious!! :D
And I think you captured the Japanese mentality very well. Very family-oriented, and I like how you progressed the plot using Nishikido's mom:)
sorry for flooding this comment full of quotes
Can't wait<333
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whew! conversations are a challenge to write. i absolutely do NOT mind that you are quoting it. ^^ seriously. it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy that you like it enough to quote it.
arigatou!!! ^____^
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