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Aug 29, 2008 08:13

Title: The Monster
Author: Jusea1
Rating: T
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Rosalie, slight Rosalie/Emmet, implied Edward/Bella
Author’s Notes: First there are spoilers for Breaking Dawn. I am aware that there are a few other stories or one-shots from this part, but it’s been in my head and I know it won’t leave until I write it. I don’t think that Rosalie ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

wm_law2003 August 29 2008, 13:59:26 UTC

Very very good!

I love Rose POVs. IMO she's the most maligned character in BD. You did a great job!

jusea1 August 29 2008, 20:28:22 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. She is hated in BD, well by a lot of the readers. I thought there was more, and so...yeah.

Thanks so much, I'm glad that I was able to get it across the way I wanted to.

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jusea1 August 29 2008, 20:27:08 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I was hoping it made Rose a little more likable, I mean I know she's not a saint or anything, but still.

Thanks again.

menotwriting September 27 2008, 00:41:04 UTC

I love that you wrote the infamous phone call from Rosalie's perspective. I'd always thought it would be difficult to pull off because there's a huge character arc/journey she needs to go on in such a short amount of time. You did it beautifully! You nailed her voice, inner debate, reasoning and ultimate choices. I also enjoyed the glimpse into her relationship with Emmett. This was wonderful!

jusea1 September 29 2008, 15:18:15 UTC

Aw, thank you. I'm glad you liked this. I know that I was frustrated when people were so angry with Rosalie about what happened, but I knew that there had to be more. And I really enjoyed writing this, I wanted to show her change, so I'm glad that I was able to and it came across in that light.

Thank you so much.

kapellmeister January 4 2009, 05:26:43 UTC

Oooh. You captured Rosalie beautifully. I don't care if the rest of fandom hate her, she's one of my favorites. It was really interesting to get Bella's phone call in her point of view. People usually gloss over Rosalie. There were a few typos, but that happens to the best of us. Overall, I really enjoyed it. :D

jusea1 January 5 2009, 19:13:20 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this and think that I got Rosalie, that's always one of the things I'm worried about. I agree that most of the fandom tends to hate her and ignore her, which is a shame. Rosalie has a bit more to her, she's more complex and very interesting. I was frustrated to see how many people were angry at her in Breaking Dawn, I understood and I think most people didn't even want to try to understand her.

Thank you again for reading this and I'm glad you enjoyed this. :)