Comments | just2wings: Show Me Your Eyes, Don't Hide (Oneshot)

just2wings

Show Me Your Eyes, Don't Hide (Oneshot)

Aug 02, 2016 17:55

Pairing: JongKey
Rating: PG
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, non-AU
Summary: They all have their way of dealing; Jonghyun has always been introspective, drawing in on himself, reflecting. Kibum sometime wonders if it hurts him more than it helps.

( It wasn’t an uncommon occurrence to find him like this, staring into the mirror in front of him with a vacant expression on his face. In fact, it was becoming more and more common. )

genre: angst, type: oneshot, rating: pg, pairing: jongkey, !fanfic

Comments 18

anonymous August 3 2016, 02:10:22 UTC

this was so good and its nice seeing you write about this topic. im just glad jjong is being more like himself lately it soothes my heart.
this was beautiful and there was so much intimacy between them even before they kissed, it was heart-warming. even tho it was a bit sad, i guess i could call it bittersweet

just2wings August 3 2016, 03:47:59 UTC

Thank you, I've wanted to write something like this for a while now so I'm glad I finally got the chance to. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I was definitely hoping for an intimate feeling so thank you for that too <3

mewaqua1 August 3 2016, 07:18:33 UTC

this is so beautiful ;;;;; jjong almost made me cry ;-; rlly interesting subject to write on! Key is such a sweetie tho, taking care of Jonghyun. Quite a touching oneshot <3

just2wings August 3 2016, 07:24:11 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you think so. But don't cry! It's definitely a sensitive subject to write about so I'm glad you enjoyed it and thought it was touching, thank you very much <3

anonymous August 3 2016, 07:58:07 UTC

Breathtaking, as usual!!! Some lines in this were just, ugh, amazing, like "There were so many layers to his personality, to his character, and the thought that Kibum was somehow allowed to peel them away, slowly becoming intimate with the innermost ones warmed his heart." like nice?? Wow!! but your last line was especially beautiful AUGH I love it I feel like this is so irl jongkey thank you !

just2wings August 3 2016, 16:16:43 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked that line! And the last one ^^ and saying this reminds you of them is a great compliment so thank you for that too. I'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you very much for dropping a comment! <3

m0_shiznik August 7 2016, 05:02:05 UTC

gah!! this was sooo cute! your writing is amazing. all of the feels. poor lil jjong. ah!

just2wings August 7 2016, 21:42:01 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it ^^

sanja994 August 8 2016, 21:44:46 UTC

I'm sure I've already said it somewhere but you really are my fave JongKey author. The way you write is very beautiful and it feels so real, like you're looking at them and noting every detail down, if that makes sense. Looking forward to new updates! :) 💜

just2wings August 9 2016, 01:10:59 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so flattered you would think that, thank you. I try to write realistically (as much as I can in a fic, lol), so that means a lot <3 I'm glad you enjoyed this.