Heroes

Dec 27, 2013 12:35


~ * Heroes * ~The moon was almost full, and shone so bright and milky white that it lit up the palace grounds almost as light as day. But unlike the colourful royal gardens of the day time, the world at night was completely blue. The soft glow of the moon made everything clear, and Alfred could see perfectly as he wove his way through the hedges - ( Read more... )

fanfiction; hetalia; ukusuk

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warriorseadra December 27 2013, 13:42:04 UTC
Fangirl this is beautiful! I love your approach to my Heroes prompt, and both Alfred and Arthur are well in-character. Alfred the dreamer-type, Arthur the more grounded type, yet they belong together and need each other and will do anything for one another ;u;

I see where the lyrics fit well with their dialogue and I'm glad you found a way for that song to work so well in a Cardverse AU so perfectly. Thank you, and of course, Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you too ouo

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just_a_fangirl December 27 2013, 14:27:03 UTC
I'm so glad you like it! I hope it was okay for me to go the route of the moral "heroes" and that you weren't expecting either of them to be warrior heroes in a Spades battle or something.

I'm sorry it's a bit late - I had it ready in time for Christmas Day, but we set off earlier than I expected to visit family for 2 days, and I didn't get a chance to post the fic before I left.

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jedishampoo January 9 2014, 20:50:08 UTC
Sorry this reply is late, but I'm catching up on all the secret santa exchange fics (and art). What a sweet and hopeful fic this is! I like how you used the song lyrics in their dialogue, and how they made sense there. Your Alfred is perfectly idealistic and bullheaded enough to be that change, too. :)

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