Breathe Me

[just_being_me08]

“Be my friend
Hold me, wrap me up
Unfold me
I am small
I'm needy
Warm me up
And breathe me”

There were complications. Huge, twirling masses that spun and gyrated through the endless whirls of the space between them. Voices surrounded them, chanted to them, a common mantra beating against silence. They were not supposed to be

Comments

[samueljames]

Great descriptions and great flow of words. Nothing wrong with trying different things with your writing. I love the idea of them shielding each other.

[morgia]

First, you took my attention by the title... My song... *sigh*I love it so much.

You wrote a beautiful fic ma belle, sweet in his crual simplicity: love is a need......

Take care ma belle sis,

xxxxxxxxxx

[sakinow]

I love this departure in style - a multi-faceted shiny gem of a fic.