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just_jasper

Spun Hearts: Falter

Jul 01, 2012 02:54

Title: Falter
Author: wanderingjasper
Rating: FRAO
Characters: Reid/OC, Morgan/Reid
Word Count: 2855
Themes: Drama, angst
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, but I do take liberties with them for no financial gain.
Notes: Part of the Spun Hearts 'verse. Previous instalments: here.
Summary: Alejandro leaves, and everything goes to hell.

( I was clinging to all that had been and, in an ideal world, all that we had hoped for. He, he wanted out. )

criminal minds, spun hearts, morgan/reid, fanfic

Comments 23

marisolsopa July 1 2012, 04:39:34 UTC

Japer you just broke my heart. I'm crying over here.

And that's a good thing because it's so good that goes straight to my heart.

just_jasper July 1 2012, 10:08:26 UTC

aww bb <3

freakingdork July 1 2012, 05:11:06 UTC

JASPER NO

I just...throughout the whole chapter, I felt like..."oh god, oh god, oh god, this is going to turn out horribly, no water you doing, noooooooo."

Which basically just means it was perfect.

just_jasper July 1 2012, 10:10:46 UTC

thanks bb

sorrow_95 July 1 2012, 10:28:21 UTC

I know Morgan's a fictional character but I'm so angry at how he's treating Reid that I just want to slap him!
Wonderfully heartbreaking chapter - can't wait for more!.

celinicious July 1 2012, 19:33:50 UTC

Whyyy are you always do this to my hearrrtt omgod
I was Spencer during this chapter it was dramatically perfect ....
Oh god, never stop writing I beg you seriously...
I just can't wait for the next update <3

chensuu July 2 2012, 16:45:33 UTC

The sheer pain of this was so beautiful. OMG. I have no more words.