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fic: There's a violence in my heart (1/1) - River & 11

Jan 30, 2012 03:00

Title: There's a violence in my heart
Author: just_liv
Rating: R
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairings: Eleven, River
Words: 1,534
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who.
Summary: He takes her to the TARDIS and promises the universe. Anywhere in space and time. But the only thing she wants, he can not give her.
Warning: This fic was conceived as a response to a ( Read more... )

doctor who, river/11, fanfiction

Comments 5

lonewytch January 30 2012, 08:01:54 UTC

This was heartbreaking. And gorgeous. And perfectly written. Sooooo tragic, i can feel the ache.

just_liv January 30 2012, 08:46:47 UTC

Thank you! I was so very nervous while writing this, my very first fic for this fandom! And what a talented fandom, hence my performance anxiety. But I must admit that the perfectly writen part is only granted due to Tisziny beta-rescue. Still, I'll take it anyways. Gladly. :)

dc_svfan January 31 2012, 13:57:14 UTC

It was heartbreaking and fantastic. So perfectly fitted and so believable. It broke my heart in that way only River and the Doctor can.

just_liv January 31 2012, 16:54:49 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed! It means a lot to me especially the "believable" part, because that's what I was aiming for. And yes, River and the Doctor do have the ability of breaking our hearts like no other. I couldn't agree more.

jadethe2nd January 31 2012, 20:52:46 UTC

This was terrible and gorgeous at the same time. I can totally see that. Oh, my heart.