Comments | just_smth: Not quite sure why I'm posting it...

just_smth

Not quite sure why I'm posting it...

Oct 20, 2008 20:56

Okay. I really don’t know where that came from. Especially considering English is not my native language. So be prepared for stupid and not so stupid mistakes.

( Just a short A/R drabble. Had to get it out of my head. )

bsg, fic, adama/roslin

Comments 12

katamarann October 20 2008, 20:30:41 UTC

Aww. That was really sweet. And I didn't see any weird mistakes...except for Bill being a sleeping idiot ;-)

franglaisy October 20 2008, 20:46:24 UTC

He sleeps A LOT! lol

just_smth October 20 2008, 22:34:31 UTC

Thank you.
Unfortunately, Bill being a sleeping idiot is not a mistake :( Wish it was the case though.

franglaisy October 20 2008, 20:45:55 UTC

Aww that was so cute! What is you native language, just out of interest?

just_smth October 20 2008, 22:36:03 UTC

Glad you liked it!
My native language is Russian. Why I don't write in it, I honestly don't know.

franglaisy October 20 2008, 22:37:19 UTC

You write really well in English, you should be proud. In fact yours is as good as mine, and im english! lolol

just_smth October 20 2008, 22:42:24 UTC

Thank you. You are too kind.
It's only because it was such a short story. No room for too many mistakes, I guess.

unavitasegreta October 20 2008, 21:25:16 UTC

Aaaaww, that was such a sweet story!

just_smth October 20 2008, 22:39:58 UTC

Thank you!
Sweet but sad...

i_am_davnee October 20 2008, 22:57:35 UTC

That was really, really sweet. Your characterization of Laura was adorable. And your English is quite good. You should absolutely write more. :-)

just_smth October 20 2008, 23:06:40 UTC

Thank you.
I do believe that Laura is adorable. Especially when she allows herself to be (or at least forgets that she should look Presidential).

i_am_davnee October 20 2008, 23:39:11 UTC

If only she would forget to do that more often! :-)