Comments | justanotherfic: Criminal Intent. Eames, Nichols, Goren. E/N, G/E. Partners.

justanotherfic

Criminal Intent. Eames, Nichols, Goren. E/N, G/E. Partners.

Sep 18, 2009 11:19

Title: Partners
Characters: Eames, Nichols, Goren
Pairings: Eames/Nichols, not so small hints of Goren/Eames
Word Count: 3911
Rating: T to M
Summary: When she first starts working with him, he annoys her just a little - goes off on tangents, takes huge mental leaps, doesn't really consider her all that much. Just like another cop she knows. Maybe ( Read more... )

[character] nichols, [character] goren, [pairing] eames/nichols, [character] eames, [tv] l&o:ci, [fanfiction] fanfiction, [pairing] goren/eames

Comments 21

Comment basric September 18 2009, 17:15:13 UTC

A good quick read. In characters voice. You feel empathy for the all. Well done.

Re: Comment justanotherfic September 21 2009, 19:40:56 UTC

Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :)

howarethosenuts September 18 2009, 18:32:07 UTC

This is a great fic. It's really in character, and the angst is great. Poor Alex!

I would love to see a continuation to this, if you are thinking of doing so.

justanotherfic September 21 2009, 19:43:35 UTC

Thank you! :D

I haven't really thought about a sequel. I do want to write another Alex/Zach fic though, so you never know.

citjara September 19 2009, 16:24:18 UTC

This was interesting. And different.

I don't know whether I see Bobby or Zach as someone who would loose their temper like that, I really liked how you put together that story, how you arranged the scenes, especially at the beginning. I also really like how you just let the story flow. Bravo!

justanotherfic September 21 2009, 19:53:08 UTC

Different is good, I hope? :P

I could see Bobby lose his temper, especially in the later seasons (and since I am a G/E shipper, especially over Alex - like he did in Blind Spot). I agree that Zach wouldn't really lose his temper, and that is why no one is holding him back and two guys are holding Bobby back.

citjara September 21 2009, 20:03:43 UTC

Different is very good!!

Hmm, I don't know, I just don't see Bobby hitting someone, but then, you're right, he turned absolutely physical with Frank... I'll have to think about that.

justanotherfic September 21 2009, 20:12:21 UTC

And with Declan, too. :)

undrheavenskies September 20 2009, 07:52:37 UTC

Nice!

justanotherfic September 21 2009, 19:53:31 UTC

Thank you!

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justanotherfic September 21 2009, 19:58:48 UTC

Thank you! :D

I'm not really fond of Alex/Peter as anything other than a short fling or possibly good friends, but I agree that it could be interesting to explore it. :)