Fic: Stars Forever, Part 2

[justbreathe80]

Part 1

Comments

[uniqlos]

This was awesome, I love the universe you created, it just flows so seamlessly and I love how neither Mark or Eduardo had to give up aspects of themselves to simultaneously pursue their dreams and a relationship with each other. I'd love to see more of this 'verse if you decided to write more :D

In the middle of reading this I totally decided they should move to Texas and be like Mr. And Mrs. Coach lol Eduardo's hair is nice, like Kyle Chandler's!

[ginevrawp]

I can't remember how many times I've reread this in the last 24 hours, probably a thousand. Or maybe it was ten, it doesn't really matter.
What matters is that you've managed to make me fall with them in each and every one of those rereads because your narrative is simply amazing.

Just, wow.

[adizzymess]

You've managed to combine two of my most favorite things. You are perfect (you deserve all of the awards, ALL OF THEM) and this is just fabulous. Seriously, it is beautiful. I love the universe you've created for them, everything seems to just flow so seamlessly. Words are failing me right now, I think I need to read this ten or so more times haha.

[im_with_him84]

I literally spent my morning at work reading this...loved it. You did a great job on the football parts, it was thrilling to read. And I loved the end.

[leopardchic79]

Really, really loved this! Loved your writing & how you seamlessly dropped the characters into perfect places (which is my favorite sort of au). It's just too bad Eduardo has to play for the Patriots! Haha ;) Great story!!