There’s a commercial on TV selling car insurance and it’s not exactly the most romantic or perfect moment to say what he’s about to say but, there’s something about now, something that makes Harry believe that if he doesn’t say it then he probably never will and he’s so sick of not saying things.
“Louis,” He says, watching Louis take another casual drink from his mug, “I think I might be in love with you.”
Louis just nods as if Harry is reading the TV guide or asking if he wanted to get take-away from dinner, “Yeah, I think I might be in love with you, too.”
this bit was perfect though, your story was like them, like jigsaw and this just slotted it all together. ah i love your writing!
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i love the way you captured their essence, it's just them and i shouldn't be so invested, but i am.
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There’s a commercial on TV selling car insurance and it’s not exactly the most romantic or perfect moment to say what he’s about to say but, there’s something about now, something that makes Harry believe that if he doesn’t say it then he probably never will and he’s so sick of not saying things.
“Louis,” He says, watching Louis take another casual drink from his mug, “I think I might be in love with you.”
Louis just nods as if Harry is reading the TV guide or asking if he wanted to get take-away from dinner, “Yeah, I think I might be in love with you, too.”
this bit was perfect though, your story was like them, like jigsaw and this just slotted it all together.
ah i love your writing!
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