You're the only one breaking me down like this. [One shot]

Apr 28, 2012 20:19

Fandom: One Direction.
Pairing: Harry/Louis.
Word Count: 1,141 
Summary: Five-time, kissing kind of thing.

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justgaytbh April 30 2012, 15:14:29 UTC
YOU'RE AWESOME. thank you!!

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prrongs April 28 2012, 20:08:18 UTC
this is so damn cute, adorable and perfect.
i love the way you captured their essence, it's just them and i shouldn't be so invested, but i am.

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justgaytbh April 30 2012, 15:14:06 UTC
i shouldn't be so invested either but it's hard to escape them tbh. thank you, sweetheart <3

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mrsyt31 April 28 2012, 20:27:30 UTC
Love this!

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justgaytbh April 30 2012, 15:14:12 UTC
thank you ! x

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justgaytbh April 30 2012, 15:13:42 UTC
aaaaashdasuah, thank you x

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teaatsix April 28 2012, 20:50:23 UTC
oh wow, this was absolutely lovely

There’s a commercial on TV selling car insurance and it’s not exactly the most romantic or perfect moment to say what he’s about to say but, there’s something about now, something that makes Harry believe that if he doesn’t say it then he probably never will and he’s so sick of not saying things.

“Louis,” He says, watching Louis take another casual drink from his mug, “I think I might be in love with you.”

Louis just nods as if Harry is reading the TV guide or asking if he wanted to get take-away from dinner, “Yeah, I think I might be in love with you, too.”

this bit was perfect though, your story was like them, like jigsaw and this just slotted it all together.
ah i love your writing!

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justgaytbh April 30 2012, 15:13:29 UTC
thank you so much!

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