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justjeanette

NCIS/TS Fic: The Cost of Divorce 2/?

Jul 18, 2009 11:28

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If Gibbs hadn't been already been watching DiNozzo, having decided the young Detective was worth more than the expensive clothes suggested, he would have missed it. One second he was dealing with a very confident, and obviously capable Detective, the next he was watching a playboy at work.

"Hey Bunka, longtime ( Read more... )

gibbs/dinozzo, cost of divorce, wip, jim/blair, the sentinel, crossover, ncis

Comments 35

heavenreturned July 18 2009, 04:37:16 UTC

*SQUEEEEEEE* YES!!! Perfect!! just Perfect!! you have all their personalities perfect!! I love Blair soooo much :D

justjeanette July 23 2009, 04:07:44 UTC

Thank you. Writing with seven main characters (Ducky and Abby are yet to hit the scene) is proving to be a challenge. Keeping the known personalities within reasonable tolerance of what their canon characters are, even more.

So if I'm getting it right I'm happy. Let me know if I stray too far.

Blair is going to get to have some fun in the fic... ~.^

ayankha July 18 2009, 05:06:36 UTC

"Hey, calm down." When the command wasn't obeyed, instantly, Gibbs resorted to a quick clip upside the back of the head.

Stunned, DiNozzo just looked at the Fed.

"You calm now?"

that is so gibbs-ish! i loved it!!

justjeanette July 23 2009, 04:08:32 UTC

I seem to have gotten that right. Now all I have to do is keep getting it right. Thankls for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy.

nightshadow_t2 July 18 2009, 07:46:41 UTC

Wonderful! Sentinel and NCIS. Truly, though I loved the hole time-phase bit. It's certainly a new take. I'm looking forward to reading more. I was also wondering. The Texas bit they mention. Is that an existing story I can go read while waiting for more of this one? :)

justjeanette July 18 2009, 08:31:45 UTC

No Texas story yet though I have an M7/ATF bunny looking at me funny. I put a throw away line in a fic and suddenly it thinks it's time for a new story. WAAAAA

Glad you like and so much more is to come.

nightshadow_t2 July 18 2009, 19:40:46 UTC

*Bounces* M7/ATF???? I love that verse!!! On its own or crossed with another fandom I like (Sentinel is always good, though I read an AWESOME Due South cross). *puts out food for the Bunny.* Grow nice and big please. ^_^

justjeanette July 18 2009, 22:55:50 UTC

Let me guess Due Seven by Gina. That is a brilliant crossover and the story that introduced me to the AFT verse.

Glares at food... Bunny just smiles up at me.

ferneberga July 18 2009, 09:16:57 UTC

loved the gibbs' headslap finish, bring on the next chapter

justjeanette July 23 2009, 04:09:17 UTC

Coming.... ~.^

And I hope you enjoy that one too.

grey853 July 18 2009, 11:32:28 UTC

I don't usually like Xovers, for a lot of reasons, but this one works. You've managed to really bring the voices of all the characters into it, which isn't easy. Love the story so far and I'm looking forward to more. Thanks.

Thank you justjeanette July 23 2009, 04:10:45 UTC

I'm trying to get them right. Crossovers either work or fail badly. I'm aiming for the first and these characters seem to be happy to play together. I hope you enjoy the rest of the tale.