Comments | justjeanette: NCIS/TS Fic: The Cost of Divorce 3/?

justjeanette

NCIS/TS Fic: The Cost of Divorce 3/?

Jul 24, 2009 22:46

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"No."

"Comments like that going to cause you trouble?"

"Depends."

"On what?"

"On how stupid Valdez and Benden are. If they think Bunka's talking out his ass, no problems, if not, time to polish the resume again."

"Again?"

"Look Gibbs, I don't know what it's like in the military, but out ( Read more... )

gibbs/dinozzo, cost of divorce, wip, jim/blair, the sentinel, crossover, ncis

Comments 29

ahavia July 25 2009, 03:24:03 UTC

Reading and enjoying!
Ahavia

justjeanette July 25 2009, 04:34:43 UTC

Thank you.

maekala July 25 2009, 03:43:57 UTC

This story continues to draw me in and I love it. Interesting byplay between all the primary characters and my mind is speculating wildly.

Also, a bit of (hopefully) constructive criticism: thought processes got a bit convoluted in the middle as everyone wondered about everyone else, especially around Turner's turn. But the flow caught back up again not long after. And I am still loving it.

Thanks justjeanette July 25 2009, 04:25:51 UTC

Constructive criticism is always welcome, That section was hard to write and I'm not sure I'll ever get it right; the hard part of writing an ensemble fic... dealing with more than two characters when you need to know what everyone is doing gets to be complicated.

This is the first time I've rtied wriitng with this many characters in play at once. I think I'm a glutton for punishment. Luckily I'm not going to need 6-8 on screen together again (I hope).

Thanks for your comments and I hope you enjoy the rest of this tale. It is all plotted but I'm still working some areas to clean up times lines etc.

murgy31 July 25 2009, 04:14:12 UTC

Wow! amazing!

Thank you justjeanette July 25 2009, 04:29:37 UTC

I'm having a lot of fun with this story and I'm trying to write it well so thank you for your comments.

ferneberga July 25 2009, 10:23:36 UTC

Intriguing is the word that comes to mind. Look foward to your next instalment

Thank you justjeanette July 27 2009, 03:09:14 UTC

We'll finally find out why Tony thinks he has a serail, at least. ~.^

Hopefully you will continue to enjoy.

rogue_psion2 July 25 2009, 12:14:08 UTC

I like the character interactions so far and eagerly await the next chapter.

Thank you justjeanette July 27 2009, 03:10:06 UTC

Juggling 6 main characters is so much fun... And I still have Abby to add to the mix.

Hopefully you will continue to enjoy.