This is a beautiful series. None of the actions are overdone - Heero isn't ballisticly possessive, simply jealous and a little forlorn, and Duo is just happy, and not stupidly so. I love the characterizations and all the little details make this fic fun to read. I like how it is all told through Howard's point of view and his own observations. A different perspective is always fun. I also like the idea that Howard and Duo would keep in contact and see each other every now and then. They fit together in the story, with Heero as a casual observer or something of the like.
Do you mind if I friend you? I'd like to be able to keep track of your stories - I looked through your previous entries and found lots of stuff that I've commented on in different places. I always feel odd about friending people without asking first, so I'm asking (and hoping!). Thank you for writing and I hope that you are going to continue writing this series.
Oh yaaay, please friend me, and thank you for asking so nicely! It's sort of uncomfortable isn't it, which is kind of odd, seeing as we all really just want to be read and be heard. My journal is just a box for my fics, so shouldn't be too spammy.
I'm so glad you're enjoying this. I'm having a lot of fun with Howard. He's a great excuse to be over the top, although I'm having trouble getting him to notice the right stuff; he couldn't be less interested in Duo's glorious mane of chestnut hair, for example!
Again, thanks so much, and more soon I hope! ^___^
Was planning on waiting 'till you finish this before reading ('cuz WIPs killllll meeeeeeeeeeeee), but ... couldn't resist anymore. WHY DOES THIS ALWAYS HAPPEN DAMMIT! @_@ [pants]
Anywho ... in all honesty, I don't usually like Heero/Duo stories that are told entirely from someone else's POV. Makes'em more impersonal, ya know? But this I'm enjoying. X3 A lot. S'very cute. :DDD Howard's POV is fun, and I love the interaction between Heero and Duo. Though it does make me want to snuggle the former and smack the latter on the head a bit. ^~^;
Looking forward to seeing more of this, and hope you don't mind my friending you. =^_^=
Mmmm I soo agree. WIPs suck *badly*. And I'm afraid that this is gonna be kinda longish. >_< (or ^_^ depending on your point of view!) I'm trying to write fast. Ish. Glad you're enjoying Howard. He's a blast because he's so extreme. Still, I figure he's gotta sleep sometime, then someone else might get a go...^.~
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Do you mind if I friend you? I'd like to be able to keep track of your stories - I looked through your previous entries and found lots of stuff that I've commented on in different places. I always feel odd about friending people without asking first, so I'm asking (and hoping!). Thank you for writing and I hope that you are going to continue writing this series.
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I'm so glad you're enjoying this. I'm having a lot of fun with Howard. He's a great excuse to be over the top, although I'm having trouble getting him to notice the right stuff; he couldn't be less interested in Duo's glorious mane of chestnut hair, for example!
Again, thanks so much, and more soon I hope! ^___^
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Anywho ... in all honesty, I don't usually like Heero/Duo stories that are told entirely from someone else's POV. Makes'em more impersonal, ya know? But this I'm enjoying. X3 A lot. S'very cute. :DDD Howard's POV is fun, and I love the interaction between Heero and Duo. Though it does make me want to snuggle the former and smack the latter on the head a bit. ^~^;
Looking forward to seeing more of this, and hope you don't mind my friending you. =^_^=
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me, i don't blame you... it's a good series. :)
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And *yes* please do be my friend!^___^
Going away to write very fast now...
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More any minute now.^_^
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