Comments | justkat2790: [fic.] Reasons in a Nutshell 9/25? (1x2, shounen ai, humour, fluff, mild angst)

justkat2790

[fic.] Reasons in a Nutshell 9/25? (1x2, shounen ai, humour, fluff, mild angst)

Mar 28, 2006 17:54

Written for gw500 Challenge 113: Fake. Feature character: Dorothy Catalonia

( Not the Seven O’Clock Police )

heero/duo, nutshell

Comments 15

lil_1337 March 28 2006, 09:10:59 UTC

*applauds* nicely done! *still feels bad for Howard*

justkat2790 March 28 2006, 09:36:08 UTC

Thank you!!!^_^ And yes...*poor* Howard. Forgot to note in the A/N that there is a preceding chapter 8 in my LJ, which doesn't solve much, but anyway...

lil_1337 March 29 2006, 14:45:32 UTC

I'll have to go back and check out chapter 8.

anonymous March 28 2006, 12:31:22 UTC

Nicely done.

Shayne

justkat2790 March 28 2006, 12:53:59 UTC

Thank you kindly. ^___^

merith March 28 2006, 13:19:50 UTC

oh man... always so close. and now something new... this is good... very good.

thanks kat. just lovely.

justkat2790 March 29 2006, 00:43:49 UTC

Oh thank you! Yes I was just sitting here thinking that I needed complexity, and lo and behold he just skated in! ^___^

lycorias March 28 2006, 14:51:44 UTC

Hey! It's so much fun reading this story, it's unbelievable. :D
And it's great that you update so often. (Can't even keep up with commenting... sorry o.O' But I want you to know that I adore the hell out of this story ^.^)

Your characterisation is awesome, and I love your Heero (especially in the last part. Poor guy. But very IC)

So Howard told Heero after all. Mh, I'm curious what his problem is and if Heero decides to tell Duo.

Uhm, yes, and I wanted to ask you if I could friend you? :)

justkat2790 March 29 2006, 01:51:29 UTC

Oh yaay...I'm *so* glad you're having fun. I really want to show boys-being-boys, and to create characters that you could fall in love with. It's a welcome break from all the misery too.O_o

And yes. Please do, do friend me. Although there's not much happening except this at the moment, but I'd love you to anyway. ^___^

lycorias March 29 2006, 20:29:58 UTC

*hehe* there's no way of having no fun when reading the story ^.^

I really love the way Heero gets all stiff whenever Duo's near him, and then pushes him away. That's so like him. :D Duo is adorable too, although I want to smack him half the time ;)
(I only hope you won't exaggerate his obliviousness, because in some fics it's so much that it isn't even funny anymore. But I think you won't do that. ^.^)

And I think I already said that I love the POV. Howard is so cool. Apart from being a drinker, of course.

Uhm yeah, I added you ;) It's an honour. =)

hostilecrayon March 28 2006, 23:08:48 UTC

Ooo, a kid in the mix, eh? This'll make things all the more interesting... And when is Duo going to get the hint?! -.-;; Poor Heero... Looking forward to more!

justkat2790 March 29 2006, 02:06:46 UTC

Mmm. I *really* wasn't planning on a kiddie OC in this, but now that he's skated in I think that he's going to be handy for stacks of stuff, especially revealing bits of the past without a whole lot of flashbacks.

And yeah...Duo is really thick as two short planks, isn't he.^__^ Although he doesn't have our advantage; he doesn't know that he's gay! ^_^

I'm intrigued about how people actually discover that they are gay, given that they're trained to be hetero from such an early age. Especially those ones that float around on the Kinsey Scale. Seduction by an older person would be the obvious way, but otherwise I suspect that it might take a while to sink in.

More soon!

hostilecrayon March 29 2006, 02:33:41 UTC

I noticed your facination. XD It was in the only other long piece I've read by you, after all. ^.^ I agree, and I can't wait to see where it goes this time! ^_____________^