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merith April 3 2006, 11:36:04 UTC
hmmm, i suspect howard's in for a surprise. :) heero's a little devious and duo's being a dipshit. duo being so oblivious to shelley's obvious manipulations is just killing me here! :) i know he's not serious about her at all -- doesn't even think of her, really. but man, i wanna go flatten her some. ...and now duo's beginning to think thoughts he shouldn't.

very nice kat. thanks

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justkat2790 April 3 2006, 20:16:40 UTC
Gulp.

*ducks and runs away*

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merith April 3 2006, 20:23:11 UTC
*eyes you in speculation*

and just what does that mean, young lady?

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justkat2790 April 3 2006, 20:34:34 UTC
Ummm...more for GW500? *starts digging large hole in ground and buying tinned food* Thanks by the way!^_^

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theotherdigit April 3 2006, 13:38:04 UTC
Still wanna snuggle and cuddle Heero. And smack Duo. So frustrating! >_< Nrrrrrrrh. Not writing Howard off for dead just yet, though. I know I'd be able to find the symptoms of any disease in existence in myself, so his thinking that he has cancer says absolutely nothing. u_u

More? Soon? Please? <3 <3 <3 <3

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justkat2790 April 3 2006, 20:34:55 UTC
Author's Notes to Self:
1 cuddle Heero
2 smack Duo
3 find a cure for cancer
4 buy chocolate... lots of chocolate...

Thanks for slogging through all the misery!^_^

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lycorias April 3 2006, 14:38:05 UTC
Heya!
Omg, poor Heero, again! There he goes shopping for Duo's favorite food and Duo obliviously spends the whole afternoon with the girl's stupid manipulated car... *weeps* What a slap in the face... o.O'

I love the scene when Heero walks home and is surprised by the noise in the bush. The way he automatically analyzes the best hiding-spot for a hitman and how he expects the kid to act like a killer (at first) is great. Shows that it's not so easy to leave the past behind.

Did Howard kind of self-diagnose that he has cancer, or did he visit a doctor? That's not really clear.
And hm yeah, I hope Heero will guess Duo's thoughts.

I also hope you'll update soon. This story is so great! ;)

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justkat2790 April 3 2006, 20:26:27 UTC
Ouch. I know...poooor Heero ;__;

More soon!

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morhirwen April 3 2006, 17:52:38 UTC
Great chapter!
I noticed that everybody seems to want to smack Duo! (including me!!!) That's good, usually we feel like that about Heero... :P
I'll try to stop agonizing, and wait to see how things unfold! But, please, make Heero happy!!! *hugs Heero* XD

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justkat2790 April 3 2006, 20:53:48 UTC
Authors Mission
Must make Heero happy.

Nimru...
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oh dear
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but Duo's completely thick
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and all this other stuff keeps happening
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and then there's Howard
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and what about Rikky, and...
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.
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oh all right then.
...ryoukai

Thanks for sticking with it!^____^

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arcanetheorem April 3 2006, 22:39:25 UTC
Even if it's physically impossible for two women to have babies, I want to have yours because of this fic! ;D I, too, am hoping that Heero will soon be close to getting what he wants (Duo) and that Howard isn't that bad off, but for some reason, I almost want Howard to die. I like the morbid-true-to-life scenarios in fanfiction, and think it might also be fitting for the story---though, I still can't wait to see what you'll cook up for the coming chapters :D The one thing I absolutely love about this story is that you have the dynamics of not only Heero and Duo, but Howard as well. Howard, from what I've seen, is very hard to describe and understand as a character, and I think you're doing him very well for this story.

The two things I'm most excited about, however, is Rickky's part, along with how Duo's going to cope with the newfound information that Howard got cancer right after he met Duo---I think Duo's going to be angst-ing over that for quite a while, and I can't wait to read it :D

More, onegai? :)

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justkat2790 April 4 2006, 00:47:22 UTC
Dear Arcanetheorem,

Thank you for your very kind offer of babies but the author must regretfully decline on the grounds that it will make her bum fat. er. And that she has 3 already.

However all offers of chocolate will be gratefully accepted.

Yours sincerely,
The Author

PS You spotted the Shinigami Curse! ^__^ Yaay! I thought I might have buried it a bit deep under the marmalade. *regretfully hands back chocolate as reward for clever reading*

Thanks for hanging in there!

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