[fic.] Reasons in a Nutshell 11/25? (1x2, shounen ai, humour, fluff, mild angst)

Apr 06, 2006 07:43

The first part written for GW500 Challenge 114 - surrender
Giving In )

heero/duo, nutshell

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merith April 5 2006, 22:34:55 UTC
oh... ow. you're killing me. just when it was so close to something more... and i've a feeling duo's going to notice pretty darn quick that heero isn't there any more. :(

bumpy road ahead?

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justkat2790 April 5 2006, 23:23:03 UTC
Uh huh! ;___;

Although actually pretty funny I hope. I just had to wade thru all the misery to set the scene.

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merith May 21 2006, 15:38:00 UTC
*poke*

am i gonna have to send heero after your duo's ass?

need more nutshell! and please let me know if my prodding is too annoying and doesn't help. i know sometimes it takes time for some stories to continue, and it's not that you don't want to write, just can't at the moment.

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justkat2790 May 21 2006, 23:12:57 UTC
*Ouch* ^___^
No...poke away!! It's like acupuncture for my muse!! Or, like extra feedback, which is lovely. And I'm sooo sorry for the delay. The other things just grabbed me, one after another, and I can't cope with more than one thing. *gets pathetically involved with her characters* So I shall put the next thing firmly aside *looks regretfully into the corner* to get more Nutshells out. It's all mapped out. Really!!! I just have to write it...O_o

Oh. Thanks so much for your very kind poke comment.
Kath^_______^

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theotherdigit April 6 2006, 00:21:59 UTC
Well now. I think this chapter took me through the whole emotional spectrum. @_@ Found myself snickering helplessly throughout the first part, and then things got all cute and sweet and nice and fluffy, and THEN everything went downhill. x______x I don't hate Shelley. Can't really blame her just for being interested in Duo and wanting to spend time with him, can I? But still ... ARGHHHHHHHHHH! [chews on her cup] So very, very, VERY frustrating (which I'm sure I already mentioned at some point, but anywho)! And Heero deciding that he should give up? [snuggles him tightly] Myu. ;_;

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justkat2790 April 6 2006, 09:24:42 UTC
Glad I was able to make you laugh, as well as cry. I just hate unloading a bucket-load of angst like this without something to make it better; especially with a WIP where you can't just turn to the back page and check the ending! Happy endings guaranteed! I promise!

More soon.^____^

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lycorias April 6 2006, 11:24:32 UTC
Aw yes! I think I could just copy what theotherdigit said ^.^
So very hilarious at the beginning, and then it's like "aww, look, isn't that cute"... and then I wanted to smack Duo for his obliviousness (or alternatively strangle Shelley.. I mean, yeah, she's innocent and who doesn't adore the hell out of Duo, but still... o.O').

Heero's decision is comprehensible... poor guy isn't a masochist after all. *melts away from compassion* I hope Duo'll be getting jealous as hell for a change. :D Or preferably Get A Clue.

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justkat2790 April 8 2006, 10:36:30 UTC
Hey there! Thanks so much for letting me know that you're still hanging in there. And glad you don't think Heero's wimping out too much; he's just giving himself a mission.O_o Whether he can stick with it is another story! Hopefully things'll be looking up soon, although, umm...stuff happens. Mmm. More soon!^___^

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morhirwen April 6 2006, 21:05:52 UTC
*reads the other comments* Well, I won't be repetitive, so, you know, laughed, 'awwwwed', and cryed. And thank God a happy ending is guarateed!!! :P

But I totally agree with Heero's decision. I mean, I don't want him to give up on Duo, of course, but maybe avoinding him, will give Duo a taste of his own medicine. Maybe then Duo will feel as abandoned, or as alone as Heero feels... and maybe that will help Duo notice a few things about his roommate and himself!

More soon? :D

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justkat2790 April 8 2006, 10:40:48 UTC
Gulp. Sorry for the Heero torture!!! Now it's Duo's turn...oops! More soon!

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book_people April 12 2006, 02:12:16 UTC
Ummmmm... hi!

I'm a new reader. New to the fandom, really... Anyway, I just wanted to review your fic, since I like it a lot and figure you'd like to know.

I really liked this chapter. I'm actually a bit worried about Duo. He's got a kind of everyone-I-love-leaves thing, and Heero avoiding him probably won't really help much. But! Maybe he'll get a clue! We can only hope.

Anyway, liked the chapter, looking forward to the next one. Would you mind if I friend you? I'd like to keep up on this!

Adi

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justkat2790 April 12 2006, 09:51:18 UTC
Hi!! Thanks heaps for replying. I'm glad you're enjoying so far. And yes, I would be thrilled if you friended me. Thanks again!!

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book_people April 12 2006, 17:49:44 UTC
Great! Thank you! And don't mention it. I give credit where credit's due! *grin*

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