*loves you forever omg* EEEE!!! There were so many tiny awesome details (the little Cox/JD mention, the perfect Laverne-voice, Gilderoy Lockhart being insane, the gossiping, Elliot mentioning Barry, JD's 'lucky moment') and so many larger awesome things like how convincing you have made this (I really like Doug/Padma!), and Doug being in character, and how you explained why he found things so difficult, and the whole progressing in days thing, and the fact that I really like Padma now...*dies of the awesome*
Since you mentioned it not being beta'd...I don't like correcting things (I seem to keep doing it, though), but..."an odd little bag around his waste" should be waist.
Well, I will change the first thing you found. But the part about Veting will stay as such for that is how Doug would talk. Same reason for the no dots in Padmas thing. She doesn't pause.
HAHA THIS REVIEW IS SO LONG IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY I LOVE YOU CARLY! Thanks!
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EEEE!!! There were so many tiny awesome details (the little Cox/JD mention, the perfect Laverne-voice, Gilderoy Lockhart being insane, the gossiping, Elliot mentioning Barry, JD's 'lucky moment') and so many larger awesome things like how convincing you have made this (I really like Doug/Padma!), and Doug being in character, and how you explained why he found things so difficult, and the whole progressing in days thing, and the fact that I really like Padma now...*dies of the awesome*
Since you mentioned it not being beta'd...I don't like correcting things (I seem to keep doing it, though), but..."an odd little bag around his waste" should be waist.
*dies of the awesome again*
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I just thought of that in days thing, and I enjoyed it. So I ran with it.
THANK YOU!
Oh, thanks for the correction. I shall fix it now!
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im about to fall asleep, so i cant say anything good right now, but i shall come back later and leave you a better review
<3 Carly
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HAHA THIS REVIEW IS SO LONG IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY I LOVE YOU CARLY! Thanks!
:D
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