Comments | justspaz: Short fic: HP, gen: The Positives of Great Oral Hygiene.

justspaz

Short fic: HP, gen: The Positives of Great Oral Hygiene.

Jul 08, 2007 14:32

Title: The Positives of Great Oral Hygiene ( Read more... )

my fanfiction, harry potter

Comments 4

scsquidsnaps July 8 2007, 19:22:35 UTC

That was cute. Good job.

justspaz July 8 2007, 20:11:06 UTC

Thanks. :D

newbie1990 July 8 2007, 19:52:00 UTC

Aww, this is nice.It reads like a poem, and the little hints of Hermione/Ron are adorable. And Ron's dad! And 'this is a well-known fact'! and 'Draco Malfoy like pale'! Excellent!

justspaz July 8 2007, 20:12:24 UTC

Thankies. I was hoping people would pick up on the hints, because they are always there in the books and don't really constitute as a pairing which needs to be mentioned because it is just so gathered as to what will happen.

:D