Comments | justspaz: Fic for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/5_loves">5_loves</a></strong>: Thirteen/Chase; PG-13

justspaz

Fic for 5_loves: Thirteen/Chase; PG-13

Jun 08, 2008 12:25

Title: A Look is the Fire Itself.
Fandom: House MD.
Rating: PG-13.
Pairing: Thirteen/Chase (Chase/Cameron).
Word count: 2,804.
Summary: If you play with fire, you're gonna get burned. If you play with beauty, you're going to catch on fire.
Notes: Written for 5_loves, prompt list 4, for the prompt beauty. Spoilers for all of S4, especially Wilson's Heart ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

phinnia June 8 2008, 20:10:06 UTC

Lovely, lovely. Beautiful images, all tied together so, so well. <3 <3

justspaz June 8 2008, 21:12:09 UTC

Thank you, thank you. :D

lrn567 June 8 2008, 23:41:33 UTC

wonderful story.

justspaz June 9 2008, 23:31:31 UTC

Thank you!

ladymurha June 9 2008, 11:51:36 UTC

Oh, oh my god. This... is perfect. It's written extremely well, and I love that Chase and Thirteen don't actually have a proper relationship - more something that results in small talk but still manages to say everything. The last line is an absolute knocker. Faved.

justspaz June 9 2008, 23:32:12 UTC

This comment made my day! Really, I just wrote this on a whim and then I get a comment like this. Thank you very much!

siranan June 10 2008, 08:29:31 UTC

Oh God, this is beautiful. The fire metaphor is so apt, and I didn't even realise how good they'd be together...the prettiness is almost overwhelming. I lurk a lot, but I just has to comment - I love this. In fact, I'll probably mem it (just in case no-one ever writes it again/better!)

justspaz June 11 2008, 02:04:18 UTC

Thank you! I never imagined it would be so well received, so comments like these are so surprising and uplifting.

I never imagined to be one of the first to write for a pairing. Ha, that makes me feel quite ~interesting.

:D

islander07 October 6 2008, 01:36:34 UTC

I loved it. I like the character of Thirteen.....love Chase. Love all the chararcters really. But I myself have nver really been a Chase/Cameron fan.....

To each their own right?...lol

As a perosn who ships more UC pairings, I am sooo happy to FINALLY see a Chase/Hadley (Thirteen) fic.....lol

I've been looking to find some, but so far this is really the only one I found....

If anyone knows of others, I'd love to know. You did a great job with this!! :)

justspaz October 6 2008, 02:03:10 UTC

I love both characters and I am all for the experimental pairings too. :)

I only saw one of those 50 sentences things for them, months upon months ago on house_fic. I'm sorry I cannot be too helpful, but it is the only other I know of. I like being one of the few.

Thank you so much!