Comments | justwannawish: city of dreams

silentlybelieve in justwannawish

city of dreams

Jan 03, 2016 19:13

city of dreams
kai/krystal, 6,320w, pg-13.
a/n: written for krysandkai exchange? challenge?
a/n: photographer krystal and model kai... what else do you need?

( he thinks they're going to be pretty good partners )

m: kai, f: exo, rating: pg-13, m: krystal, pairing: kai/krystal, f: f(x)

Comments 3

douc January 10 2016, 11:27:13 UTC

SPOT

(SCREAMING AT THIS AU ALREADY)

douc January 17 2016, 00:31:21 UTC

i'D LIKE TO THANK YOU (AND GOD) FOR THIS KAISTAL FLUFF/SWEETNESS THAT I'VE BEEN MISSING THIS WHOLE YEAR CAUSE IT'S BEEN SO ANGSTY FOR OUR OTP (WHEN HAS IT NOT BEEN???!)

First of all I like how it's set in NYC, it's a cliche but a classic one that I personally really enjoy. i don't usually like a fic that is happy the whole way through (it's me, I'm in the angstcircle so...) but I actually appreciated that here. It's very simple - from how they meet to how they became friends then developed into more. I don't think i've read a kaistal fic that is set up this way before or it's been a while anyway. Also, I appreciated the Sekai, Jungli and Seulkrys/kai friendships. Jongin is so dumb here tho, it's probably what he's like irl anyway. I can't see him being smooth in the presence of any girl he likes ever (/cough/ Soojung obvly /cough/)

silentlybelieve January 18 2016, 03:45:25 UTC

YOU'RE WELCOME. I SEEM TO BE THE ONLY PERSON THAT WRITES FLUFF KAISTAL BUT MAYBE IT'S BECAUSE BASICALLY ALL MY FRIENDS ARE ANGSTCIRCLE

the NYC idea came from the prompter themselves so you could thank them, but i would have set the city as nyc anyway lmao oblivious/dumb jongin is always the jongin to write tbh. and yeah, i think that's how he'd be like in real life anyway. probably super awkward around girls.

i want to be able to write angst as well ;____; we should exchange some skills man. i want to be able to write angst really well..... but thanks for reading!