The pirate story: Part one

[ainohimeliz]

This is a work in progress so suggestions and feedback are encouraged. I'm sure there are spelling errors and what not, but this is only the first draft.

Also, one more question: What is Ms. Fontain's Japanese name?

This fic is written in dialoge format, which means you have to read it as you would read a play

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[aphotic]

Ayukawa Emi is her name; family name first, personal name last.

And... interesting, a proper script. Heh, at least it's done like you would use for a play and not just because the author's lazy. XD Interesting concept, too.

[ainohimeliz]

Thanks for the info, I've found a place for her on the crew of the Osiris:
Ayukawa(Random wench/lady pirate) - "I have fooled half these brutes into believing that I am a man, but the other half knows I am a woman!"

Glad you like it. Actually, I almost always write my fan fics in dialoge format for several reasons:

1. I'm a theatre person!
2. I can hear the story better this way. (As I write I imagine it being animated in front of me. Who knows, one day I might turn this into a fan flash animation?)
3. I do alot of cosplay. Someday, I might want to see this performed at an Anime Convention or enter an abridged version of this play into a cos-play masquarade competition. If I do, I already have the script all set!

[nevermore199]

That. Was. Great.

Seriously, that was really great. Me loves it.

[ainohimeliz]

Me is glad you like it! Part two will be up after I return from Anime Expo!